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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story, so far. I suggest introducing a new color and style of panty, in each chapter. Boy shorts, French cut, tangas, Rio briefs, silk ones, little black lacey ones....you get the idea. :D
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February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can not wait for the next chapter! I read on adultfanfiction and fanfiction.net. It was very refreshing to read something well thought out and cleverly descriptive. i also find bad grammar and punctuation a distraction, so the absence of those mistakes was a big plus for me. Please keep writing this story.
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow that was fun! Nice style of writing: sexy and humorous. Keep going on this work please!
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Huh... wow. That was good. I've never heard of you before, but you've got some serious writing skills.
I hope this isn't a one shot, I'd love for it to continue.
I hope this isn't a one shot, I'd love for it to continue.
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOl! This was great! I hope you update soon!
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASEEEEEEEEEE!!!! You MUST do more!! I need to read more. LOL Great build up. Discussing romantic literature (ie soft porn) with Draco Malfoy - who'd of thunk it? LMAO LOVED IT!!!
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh i loved it. more please!
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Promising start! Ill be looking for updates!
Happy Writing!
SG
Happy Writing!
SG
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon, this is great, I love it.
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Amazing fic! Funny, sexy, super hot! Triple Threat! Keeping my eye on this one! I love your Hermione! And a "giving" Draco, YUM!