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December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I so hope you have another chapter planned soon. I really like this story. I'd love to see them fix up grimmauld place.
Cosmyk
Cosmyk
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August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello.
I would first like to say that this is starting out to be a great story. However, you haven't updated it in 2 years!! As such, being a relatively non-busy college student who happens to be a good writer--not to mention a good beta--I would like to offer my services in finishing your story for you-following your guidelines, of course. I realize that you may be too busy to finish it, and that's okay. Like I said, I have plenty of time on my hands, so I can finish it for you--perhaps even fix the spelling mistakes of your existing chapters that many have pointed out. Please send me an email with your answer to my proposal as soon as possible, at the following address: bondman_007_1358 AT yahoo DOT com (obviously, replace the AT with @ and the DOT with . ) I look forward to working with you. Have a wonderful day!
~Sean
I would first like to say that this is starting out to be a great story. However, you haven't updated it in 2 years!! As such, being a relatively non-busy college student who happens to be a good writer--not to mention a good beta--I would like to offer my services in finishing your story for you-following your guidelines, of course. I realize that you may be too busy to finish it, and that's okay. Like I said, I have plenty of time on my hands, so I can finish it for you--perhaps even fix the spelling mistakes of your existing chapters that many have pointed out. Please send me an email with your answer to my proposal as soon as possible, at the following address: bondman_007_1358 AT yahoo DOT com (obviously, replace the AT with @ and the DOT with . ) I look forward to working with you. Have a wonderful day!
~Sean
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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love where this story is going - you're a very talented writer. Keep up the good work - I'm looking forward till your next update. :):):)
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October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The spelling bothers me. You should take a look at it.
Other than that, it's not a bad fic.
Other than that, it's not a bad fic.
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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh, NICE start. I can't wait for an update:D
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August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy you updated. Looking forward to the next chapter. One small thing there were a few grammar and spelling errors, not a big deal but it can take away from the story. This is not a flame just a gentle reminder to proof your work, I know how hard it can be to pick up mistakes!
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
this story is looking good so far. The characters are in-canon and act believable. I can't find any major flaw, only some minor spelling mistakes mar the reading experience.
Keep it up!
this story is looking good so far. The characters are in-canon and act believable. I can't find any major flaw, only some minor spelling mistakes mar the reading experience.
Keep it up!