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for It Started With a Kiss

by NutsAboutHarry

person Tim Deck
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. The speeches said what needed to be said without being too long. Nice to see Neville ready to open up about his parents. Can't wait for the next chapter(you're not the only one who care about the story).
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, NAH! What an opener! That was action-packed from the get go, and oh so satisfying to see the aftermath in the Great Hall from Neville's point-of-view. I loved his V-Day/Doisenau inspired kiss after Voldemort was dispatched; so bloody romantic!

I love how you started this relationship tied to such a momentous event. Am looking forward to reading the rest, but had to comment on the first chapter. Excellent job!
person jocat
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am a very bad reviewer but I will make the effort. I do like your story.
person Tim Deck
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about the lack of reviews but I just got my new laptop (man they are expensive) and caught up with the story (apparently laptops don't like falling off of tables). Anyways, love the story and how it has progressed. Keep up the great work and hopefully there will be an update sooner than 2 months from now.
person jocat
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
giving head with a bubble headed charm (ha ha he he) Love the extra long chappie.
person jocat
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read it. Love it so far. Am a hopless reviewer though...
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, this was great, I do love this story....BUT AGAIN SWEETIE....YOUR CHAPTERS ARE TOO LONG!

Thanks for the dedication!

Looking forward to more!

~LadyVoldemort87~

xoxoxoxox
person Anon
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It started with a kiss is a wonderful exploration of supporting casts and their lives after Hogwarts. I adore any story featuring a member of the supporting cast, I am especially fond of Neville fics and this is no exception. Please keep going with this story, you might not reach the largest audience but I for one will love you for it.
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww the kiss was great :P and so was the chapter sweets. Yes your chapters are well too long LOL

I'm looking forward to Nev's morning wood!

Luv ya!
person Tim Deck
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The fight scene is perfect. It provides a nice break to the normal everyday stuff (which is great too). Can't wait to see how the fight ends.