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Tease!!! Sooo good and then it stops. Please update soon.

one ron beat death eathers at 17 now he has training, he would be more then a match for lucius.

to you make the former death eather seem like a small think, he was a serius murder, a nazi, ron not only have every right to not have his kids around him, but legally he could get for custudy becouse of her hermoine hanging out wtih,

plus ron still a war hero, and still so he could get many people to just take lucius out,

i understand what you are trying to do, but lusis past is a big deal.

and ron not a kid, and would have more then a chance to kick lucius but.

Just finished Ch. 10. She's got more self-restraint than I do! I think at the point I had decided to kiss him, seriously kiss him, we wouldn't be going to bed just to sleep. But maybe that's just me! :-) Nice story - I like how you are developing the relationship of the ex-es, as well as the relationship with the children/grandchild. I look forward to more!

Love this story. It's well written and the characters are very... enticing.

I really like this story, and I loved how Lucius took Ron to task (Ron bashing is some of my favourites)

Can't wait to read more. I love how they both are toying with the idea of each other but won't act on it. Please continue.

This story is great! keep it up!

I love your style of writing, it's so easy and enjoyable to read. I'm already looking forward to the next installment.

OOoo.. Love the first 9 chapters. Leaving off with a swimming chapter was brilliant. Lucius in swim trunks; just so steamy! Can't wait to read more.

Please!!!!!!!! I need to bottle Lucius essence........ LOL He is delicioso!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!