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November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like how you've used different theories about the Templar Knights and stuff. The only bone I have to pick is the constant misspelling of quite a few canon names, namely Voldemort and yet you manage to spell Scrimgeour correctly. what gives?
The story itself is progressing nicely. I love that Narcissa is part of the action, and has taken up training, I find it rather incongruous...from your portrayal of her at the beginning of the story. It makes me chuckle. Keep writing!
The story itself is progressing nicely. I love that Narcissa is part of the action, and has taken up training, I find it rather incongruous...from your portrayal of her at the beginning of the story. It makes me chuckle. Keep writing!
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November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 27!!! What does Severus have to say?
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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol! ROCK ON HARRY AND DRACO! i love those two and remy and narcissa
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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:D
Instant acceptance from Molly! ^^
Another great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Instant acceptance from Molly! ^^
Another great chapter. Keep up the good work.
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter. Love Smith being an heir!
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it.i cann't wait until the next chapter, to what happen.
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 26!!!
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ah ok. i must say i am really enjoying this story
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November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Totally digging the new twist with the emblem on the rob. Poor Dumbly, oh who am I kidding! Bastard deserves everything he gets!
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November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh WOW!!! cAN'T WAIT FOR MORE. DUMBLES IS GUNNA LEARN REALLY QUICKLY THAT FUCKING WITH Harry Potter is the worst thing he could ever have done. ^__^ hehe Hope to see more soon.
Ja
Sakura Maxwell-Minamino
Eternity
Ja
Sakura Maxwell-Minamino
Eternity