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for The Apprentice

by Nerys

person MrGalion
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can Totally see Harry's POV. Hermione is Right there. and Old dumbles is stopping him. Just Right there. Why can't he see? Hermione can be saved! LOL well done. Loved the ending.
schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh please let them be back together again and not just some wired magic signature of his showing it's self as she tried to control her magic. I know they say that waiting makes everything sweeter but please update sooner.
person xellamyBB
schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, he's got Hermione. Whatever are we going to do :P? *rolls eyes*

Yeeyyyy update! I thought my emails were lying to me when I got this. I was like... nawwwww... that can't possibly be right... Nerys had updated the Apprentice? Never.

Of course, you know what's coming next. That's right. Uh huh. I now want another update. It's your fault, really. You keep on writing such darn gripping plots, I can't help but want them to go on.

schedule June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just re-read this after getting your review reply to MoM part 2, and you're right; a new chapter is LONG overdue!! This is probably my favorite of your stories. I can't wait for Hermione to return to Voldemort!
schedule June 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
its such a pity you didnt go on to finish some of your stories. this one for example. i check back periodically but it seems you abandoned it.
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Finally found time to read the new chap and I liked it a lot. I am kind of twisted about Dumbledore though. I think he is a good guy in this story. He cannot do anything against Voldemort cause he is bound as a keeper, right?
person Lady T
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks a lot for the lovely, long chapter, I thoroughly enjoyed it, especially the witty banter between Fred and George. The way you write reminds me so much of Rowling's own style and you mostly stay true to the characters, which doesn't happen very often in fanfics, so that's a big plus. It's not easy to write a pairing like LV/HG and make it seem believable, but you pull it off, somehow :) I hope next chapter will be up soon, cheers.
person sbrande
schedule April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So much action in this chapter. I really do love your writing style. Everyone seems to have secrets, secrets they are not willing to part with.

Is Harry going to defeat Tom in your story? I truly hope not, but I am just a humble reader and admirer.

Love Sonia :)
person MrGalion
schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You can thank Serp that I am now a loyal follower....
I love your writings.

Looking forward to an update!
person hero_jaejoong
schedule March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
finally an update...seeing the light at the end of the tunnel..

a fantastic chappie