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for The Apprentice

by Nerys

person Kmjb
schedule May 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!!!! I am really enjoying Hermione's education with Voldemort! who would have though (dare I say it?) that he would actually care about her (of course he doesn't realize it yet)? Please update soon!!!!!!!
person Gakuhaitsu
schedule May 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Awesomeness. I've d/led this fic a while back, but I put this one on hold since I wanted to save something more lengthy (and guaranteed time-worthy)for a nice long one-shot reading day. I wasn't disappointed :)
Is it one of the Weasley's (Ginny?) in the bag or someone else from Hogwarts? Can't wait to see how the fight with Bellatrix will play out since Bella can't use her wand against Hermione. But there wasn't anything preventing physical violence was there? And we all know extremist Bella gets excited over physical torture too. Hm...
As with your other fics, I love the dark, evil and in-character Voldemort that you portrayed, and how Hermione (and her actions for the most part) is the only one that can amuse him, and constantly make him smirk. His severe mood changes create quite of tension, and this was expressed very clearly too (it put me on the edge, one minute loving, the other biting and sarcastic, and then purely masochistic) Loved the bit about Luna being one of the apprentices too, and how her uniqueness brings endless frustration upon others.
Update soon (along with Prisoner please);)
schedule April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
At first i wasn't amazed by this story, ill admit, but the more i read, the more enamored i became. Please update as soon as you can. ^^
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is an amazing story and I can't wait to read what happens next!
schedule March 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Took me a whole day straight of doing nothing else to read this story, and I must say so far its simply amazing. I really hope you update soon because its simply addictive.

Voldemort is such a sexy manbeast, although nobody seems to agree with me. "he has no nose! Hes bald! blah blah blah" I don't care I love him the way he is. Evil, sexy snakeman that he is! This story portrays him so very well. Evil, but with a dark sense of humor. Lucky lucky Hermione.

Once again please update soon,

Reine
schedule March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Even though I've been following this story for what seems like years (it probably is actual years), I wanted to tell you how thoroughly I enjoy it. I've not found a lot of Hermione/Voldemort stories that are genuinely good but this one far exceeds them all. I first found this story through fanfiction . net but I have to say I enjoy this version much more. I like it when Voldemort is actually portrayed in the right sense and not some love sick fool, I couldn't imagine him that way. Hope to see an update soon!
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, I cannot wait for more.
schedule February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Finally caught up again and damn I want to see Hermione tear a new one into Bella :D
person cosettex
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
fuck fuck fuck!!! How did I not read this piece of deliciousness before? Oh and the Weasleys walking in on them priceless! I cannot wait to hear their little "talk". Your smut muse is my goddess : O
person Fleur K.
schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading your story.....and I think I am in love. I too have been wondering what it is, exactly, that the Keepers are "keeping". Also.....who is that girl in the bag?! Since I am so addicted to your story, I think you should update asap :) By the way.....your Voldemort is way sexy. Seriously. *fans self* It makes it more believable when reading the interactions between Hermione and Voldemort.....more believable that Hermione would honestly feel pulled in so many directions about what she wants to do and what is the "right" thing to do. Anyway....update? Please? Tomorrow? In 5 minutes? :D