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for The Apprentice

by Nerys

schedule June 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, awesome, awesome, addictive!!! You need to stop procrastinating and update your stories, Nerys!!! I think I will actually die if I do not find out if Hermione joins Voldemort or not!!!! xD
schedule January 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I dont know why I always get to chapter 17 every time I re read this story and that has been quite alot of times...lol I cant past chapter 17...lol And I love how Volemorty, Voldemort is. its so intense. I will let you know when I get past that damn chapter...lol
person moor
schedule December 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow -- there's so much to this, so many layers and so much development! :D
Looking forward to the next update, I'm on the edge of my seat!
schedule October 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This may be, hands down, the BEST thing I have ever read. I can't help but wonder if I love this more than I did the original Harry Potter series. I thrive off of Tomione fanfics, reading work by you, Lady Miya and MagentaSouth with an unabashed addiction so you can imagine how I'm practically foaming at the mouth for you to update. That said, I have no right to push you for it since you must have other projects and are probably just a slave to a fickle muse but I wanted to commend you on your amazing work and encourage you to continue. I have never read another story that allowed such amazing interactions between Granger, Voldemort, Grindelwald and Dumbledear (which is a shout-out to the Very Potter Musical if you haven't seen that on youtube) making this fanfic not only well written and engaging but extremely unique <3
schedule September 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please write more! I am so hooked you have no clue!
person Alassea Malfoy
schedule September 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think I now have read all your fanfictions...
I can't explain how I simply looooooove Evil!Voldemort. Some people make him too soft. Thank goodness we have you, Ssserpensssotia, Lady Miya and Serpent in Red. *places wet kisses all over you*
I know you are not going to continue this before the Prisoner, but I can tell you that I look forward to reading more when time comes :)
person me
schedule August 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
And there are several other stories which started promising but, alas, never seem to be updated anymore, so I am leaving them of this list for now.

hipocrit much? you do the same thing (never updating or not updating for long periods and it makes your stories look abandoned
person Kiwiambrosia
schedule July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please, please, update soon!
person jsu1660n
schedule May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my fave fanfics, will you update soon please???
schedule May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I know its been a few months, but I hope the next chapter is in the works!