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Oh, dear. I knew it wasn't finished when I started reading it but I still got that awful feeling when there was no link to a new chapter. I'm not sure if you're even still writing for HP. Still wanted to drop a line to let you know that I really enjoyed this story so far and I would love to know what happens next. Your Voldemort is actually pretty sexy, especially when he's doing magic (not just the sex magic either!) so I totally agree with Hermione about that. Hermione is still very in-character even though she's obviously tempted by Voldie and the dark arts. Well, I'll keep my fingers crossed that you get inspired again. Cheers!

So I am really enjoying where this story is going, and I really hope that you plan to continue it. I started out reading another story of yours and I have since branched out to ready the rest. I think this is my second favorite. of your stories so far. The Prisoner being my first favorite. I really love your writing style and the plots you come up with are interesting and really draw me in. The magic theory conversations you have in all of your stories are amazing and very well done. I have to say yours are the best Voldemort/Hermione stories I have read yet.

P.S. Please don't leave us hanging... I want to know what happens next!

Ohhhh, I love this pairing *squeels in delight*
You are an amazing writer I was so compleatly sucked into your story after reading the first paragraph.

I was just browsing random fics when I stumbled on this one. The last dozen or so I'd read (or attempted to read) were awful -- poor or no plot, completely OOC characters, awful grammar/spelling/structure and no editing, etc., and I was about at my wit's end, when all of a sudden, I started reading this. And I COULD NOT STOP. So wonderful. I love how you've managed to take a completely believable and not-evil Hermione and pair her with Voldemort, without it being a rapefic. I was heartbroken when I got to Ch 33 and found there wasn't anymore, but I'll take you at your word in the review response forum that this fic isn't abandoned. :) Can't wait to read more!

Hello!

I recently just found your story and wanted to let you know that I think it is fantastic!! I was very disappointed, however, to find that it is still unfinished. It is such an interesting story and so well developed, are you ever going to come back and finish it?? I certainly hope so!

Best,
kate28

This story is amazing. I love your plot lines and admittedly it's smut, but quite honestly I think this is one of my favorite hp fanfics next to winterblumes. I can't wait for the update, I'm so damn interested in what it is the keepers keep. Order? No...balance? Maybe? And I really can't wait for voldemort to take a little stroll into her mind prison. I couldn't contain a chuckle at the Mcgonagall death eater scene. Please keep writing. This is fantastically entertaining.

Hello Nerys :) I just want to say that "The Apprentice" is and AMAZING story, and really makes LV/HG a plausible pairing. I love what you did with the Weasley Matriarch, and how you captured Hermiones and Voldemorts characters perfectly :) I sincerely hope you'll continue to write this fic, and update soon. I don't normally follow a WIP, but this story is definitely worth an exception to the rule.

I really wish you would continue this story and in general all your stories. The detail and level of writing is phenomenal.

Ahhh!!
I love this story!!!
Please update when you can!!!
<3 <3

Omg what a great story so far. Please update soon... I hope you finish, it's so well written. The first Tomiome story I've read and I'm in love with it!