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for The Apprentice

by Nerys

schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting story love. i love how mione stole the book from voldy. lmfao. i cant wait to read his letter. please update soon




schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more please!
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OHOHHOOOHOHOO!!! Everyone is devious muahahahaaa!! And Volders has went and disappeared on me...Haven't seen him all weekend *sniffle* *sigh* Guess I'll just stare wistfully at his picture when he was sleeping...He's so cuuuuuuuuuuute!! But shhh, don't tell...he doesn't know about it! *looks around and shoves pic back into shirt*
person sjauthor
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, naughty Hermione! Using dark arts to 'clean' a piece of parchment? :D
And stealing a book! From the Dark Lord no less! Should be interesting...especially since he is only to refrain from killing her, not from hurting her (I am assuming, since he already hurt her earlier).
Exciting.
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY!!!!!! A new story!!!! This is going to be interesting I can tell *winks*
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whi! A new fic by you! I don't really know what to say about it yet. It's mostly a lot of secrets, which is good because then you'll have something to work on! I think it's a good start, even if it's a lot to take it. But I guess it will make more sence the longer the story goes. I wonder what will happen... I can't say I have any idea except that now Hermione appearantly is the Apprentice for Voldemort... and she has to do a task she thinks it's impossible. How exciting! I'm looking forward to read more about this!
Miya
person sjauthor
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing...would love to read more!
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Nerys, my sweet fellow Dark Lord lover! You are back! This opening chapter was brilliant...And it warmed the cockels of my freezing heart to be back in with our Lord! A new story! Wahoo! Wish Serpie a big Happy Birthday from me! I can't wait for you to update! The muse isn't really thriving when it comes to my longer storys, I can write Nowhere To Hide easily, the others...Not so much! I find a nice short adventure with my Lord, soothes the muse and inspires her to create more chapters LOL, SO glad your back :D