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September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've been following this story on ff.net too and I have to say that I really like both versions. I check for updates each morning when I turn on my computer. My internet was out last week and not being able to access your stories was torture. Can't read it at the library, think of the children! ;)
Gotta love how Voldemort's teaching style is so hands on. Sure, she still has to read and write that paper, but He's doing a lot more actual instruction than she got at Hogwarts and the focus is only on her. She's in a much better position than Draco or Luna; their guides just don't care or talk around the subject. God, I understand the importance of coming to an understanding on one's own, but cmon, Dumby throw Draco a friggin bone, will ya?
Loving the lemons in chapter 18. So, Voldemort considers sex acts torture? Didn't look like Hermione was really suffering, hehe. He really knows how to get Hermione going, I gotta say. I'm so looking forward to chapter 19, lemons and otherwise. For the future, I'm especially anticipating how this off-campus experience will affect her relations with everyone at Hogwarts and at home. So many questions waiting to be answered...
Sorry to hear about your recent problems, I hope everything works out soon!
Gotta love how Voldemort's teaching style is so hands on. Sure, she still has to read and write that paper, but He's doing a lot more actual instruction than she got at Hogwarts and the focus is only on her. She's in a much better position than Draco or Luna; their guides just don't care or talk around the subject. God, I understand the importance of coming to an understanding on one's own, but cmon, Dumby throw Draco a friggin bone, will ya?
Loving the lemons in chapter 18. So, Voldemort considers sex acts torture? Didn't look like Hermione was really suffering, hehe. He really knows how to get Hermione going, I gotta say. I'm so looking forward to chapter 19, lemons and otherwise. For the future, I'm especially anticipating how this off-campus experience will affect her relations with everyone at Hogwarts and at home. So many questions waiting to be answered...
Sorry to hear about your recent problems, I hope everything works out soon!
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"perhaps you can then enlighten me upon the unimportant things you were dwelling upon, wasting my precious time" Snort... just so Voldemort.
Oh, Voldemort telling Hermione to just dream. That is kind of nice ^^
"every spell you cast needs to be deliberate or planned intently, determined or focussed on the conclusion and destined" - But what about when Harry blowed up his aunt? That wasn't deliberate, he was just angry...
Oh, good work Hermione, trying to curse Voldemort ^^ Hehe. Oh, and of course you will get crucioed for it. You know... I find it strange that Hermione doesn't get all those stress-related disease. I mean, get tortured all the time is quite stressful. So how come she doesn't get like an upset stomach or something, huh? HUH? Oh, right this is fanfiction. I keep forgetting...
Oh, I just love it when an argument turnes into sex. Good Voldemort for being so horny ^^ Oooh, if I was able to pain I'd paint Voldemort lying there on the floor with that pillow under his head... I can just see it infront of me... although, in my head, he does all kinds of naughty things to himself and Hermione is nooo where to be seen. I think I'm having a hetrosexual evening tonight ^^
Haha, funny with the mirror thing. Is it just me or don't you look taller when you have sex? All in all, niiiice sex-scene. I like it when you use charms and stuff :P Poor Hermione. And poor me who doesn't have a willing boy in her bed.... or.. I do have a coin-operated boy (if you haven't heard dresden dolls, I suggest you start listing to it to get this joke).
Oh, are Hermione going to meet Snape? HAHAH! I can't wait to see that happen :)
Mehe, it wouldn't surprise me if, when Hermione get away from him, she will start destroying all pedestals she sees. I know I would.
Haha, it would appear Draco is having some trouble too. Just Luna who is all mad and wonderful. I wonder where Dumbledore is going. I guess we will see in the next chapter.... oh, please update soon! I want to read the you-know-what-scene!
Oh, Voldemort telling Hermione to just dream. That is kind of nice ^^
"every spell you cast needs to be deliberate or planned intently, determined or focussed on the conclusion and destined" - But what about when Harry blowed up his aunt? That wasn't deliberate, he was just angry...
Oh, good work Hermione, trying to curse Voldemort ^^ Hehe. Oh, and of course you will get crucioed for it. You know... I find it strange that Hermione doesn't get all those stress-related disease. I mean, get tortured all the time is quite stressful. So how come she doesn't get like an upset stomach or something, huh? HUH? Oh, right this is fanfiction. I keep forgetting...
Oh, I just love it when an argument turnes into sex. Good Voldemort for being so horny ^^ Oooh, if I was able to pain I'd paint Voldemort lying there on the floor with that pillow under his head... I can just see it infront of me... although, in my head, he does all kinds of naughty things to himself and Hermione is nooo where to be seen. I think I'm having a hetrosexual evening tonight ^^
Haha, funny with the mirror thing. Is it just me or don't you look taller when you have sex? All in all, niiiice sex-scene. I like it when you use charms and stuff :P Poor Hermione. And poor me who doesn't have a willing boy in her bed.... or.. I do have a coin-operated boy (if you haven't heard dresden dolls, I suggest you start listing to it to get this joke).
Oh, are Hermione going to meet Snape? HAHAH! I can't wait to see that happen :)
Mehe, it wouldn't surprise me if, when Hermione get away from him, she will start destroying all pedestals she sees. I know I would.
Haha, it would appear Draco is having some trouble too. Just Luna who is all mad and wonderful. I wonder where Dumbledore is going. I guess we will see in the next chapter.... oh, please update soon! I want to read the you-know-what-scene!
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September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ugh...I FINALLY dragged my ass over here to review that alternate version of your chapter. Honestly, I hate putting things off. But I have finally gotten a chance :grins: My two classes today were cancelled, same prof for both and she was sick! So I've got a free day :dances:
Yeah Hermione, he probably did inspect your things and if that would have been there he probably would have teased her or something more evil dark lordish. And her thoughts about jumping LV's bony body were kind of funny...wonder how his ego might take that. Bony body indeed. And those snake taps would have me slightly worried as well...especially after the whole Chamber of Secrets fiasco (or maybe because they might be able to report back to LV what she's doing LOL).
Transfiguration...wonder what McGonagall would think of Hermione's use of her subject? :smirks: And she cut herself...wow to be that desperate :shakes head: that would suck. LV is just sooo evil. Leave it to Hermione to work hard not to let hormones affect her studies. Then there is the whole banana scene...I was just shaking my head the whole time reading that. Mostly because there is this creeper where I work and two of my friends who work with me and myself gave this creeper the code name "Banana" (Don't look at me I didn't come up with it but it was too funny to pass up).
She licked her lips, took a deep breath and swallowed. A tremble formed; fear and excitement rushed her, took over her body, her mind, and her soul. What would he do to her? Would it hurt? Would it satisfy this terrible craving? Would she survive it unscathed?--Her thoughts her are just so interesting. And works for what you've got later on in the chapter with "Vicky". It points to LV's conclusion.
She was his captive, his prisoner, his price. She felt it in every fiber of her being. He
Yeah Hermione, he probably did inspect your things and if that would have been there he probably would have teased her or something more evil dark lordish. And her thoughts about jumping LV's bony body were kind of funny...wonder how his ego might take that. Bony body indeed. And those snake taps would have me slightly worried as well...especially after the whole Chamber of Secrets fiasco (or maybe because they might be able to report back to LV what she's doing LOL).
Transfiguration...wonder what McGonagall would think of Hermione's use of her subject? :smirks: And she cut herself...wow to be that desperate :shakes head: that would suck. LV is just sooo evil. Leave it to Hermione to work hard not to let hormones affect her studies. Then there is the whole banana scene...I was just shaking my head the whole time reading that. Mostly because there is this creeper where I work and two of my friends who work with me and myself gave this creeper the code name "Banana" (Don't look at me I didn't come up with it but it was too funny to pass up).
She licked her lips, took a deep breath and swallowed. A tremble formed; fear and excitement rushed her, took over her body, her mind, and her soul. What would he do to her? Would it hurt? Would it satisfy this terrible craving? Would she survive it unscathed?--Her thoughts her are just so interesting. And works for what you've got later on in the chapter with "Vicky". It points to LV's conclusion.
She was his captive, his prisoner, his price. She felt it in every fiber of her being. He
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August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOO LEMONY GOODNESS! Damn now I need a cold shower! GAH! I soooo know how 'Mione feels. *gets shoved to the side* Voldemort: Fucking Hermione all over the web?! Well my dear, it's not my fault everyone seems to appreciate my dominance over her. *raises eyebrows* Including yourself it would seem. *grin* Evildolly: just ignore him. Voldemort: EXCUSE ME?!?! Evildolly: uhh...ehehe. *sweatdrop* Nothing. I said nothing at all. I appreciate your dominance too. Really, I mean that. *backs away slowly* Voldemort: You had better. And Nerys, it would take me having a girlfriend *rolls eyes* to be a "cheating dark lord". HAH! I can't help it if these women all love my evil dark lord charm! *stares haughtily* Evildolly: *shakes head* Could he be more arrogant? Seriously? *runs before getting cursed*
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August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Worth the wait and you've completely lost me.
They have sex and she dreams of animals... alright, you officially owe me an awesome next couple of chaps to explain THAT. I'm so lost. lol
They have sex and she dreams of animals... alright, you officially owe me an awesome next couple of chaps to explain THAT. I'm so lost. lol
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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well that last chappie was confusing, but I guess it was supposed to be. I LOVED the chapter where she submitted to LV; I assumed the dream was the one that the dark people send their apprentices, except that in that there are two paths, right? Anyways, very good, and I can't wait for an update!
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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lololololololololololol great chapter please keep it going i love it.
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August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutly amazing! You have a knack for keeping everyone in character. I cant wait to read more!!!!
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August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Devilish Dark Lord charm?! Yeah that about sums it up. ARGH!!! I need a lemon!!! And not the kind u put in a glass of iced tea! As always, dear Nerys, I must be impressed with the plots you come up with! Always original, dark, and funny. So you did like the young tom in 6? He was kinda creepy it just seemed his face was too soft. Not the little boy but the school age Tom. The mocking condescending tone he used was spot on, I will agree. Unfortunately I must leave and make dinner seeing as I have a thoroughly annoyed and hungry Dark Lord waiting for me to cook dinner. I told him he wouldnt have this problem if he'd stop running all the damn house elves off! Bah! Looking forward to next chapter! Ta-Ta!!
~evildolly~
~evildolly~
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August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooooooh!
I love this! Update soon :)
I love this! Update soon :)