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by Nerys

person firewall
schedule January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know I'm not signed in but I'm too lazy to right now. When I saw you had updated I was relieved that you had not abandoned this story. I can accept RL and illness and hope that both do not deter you from future updates. Now I must go and enjoy reading two new chapters. A lovely new year's treat. :)
person firewall
schedule January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
There I'm caught up and just have a couple of things to share. First I was struck by the argument Gellard made re Severus' wand being "buried alive" with the dead wizard. It was something I hadn't thought about...where would a wand go when the wizard they chose died? Impressive.

The other thing that I have enjoyed from the beginning of your story has been the wry and sarcastic tone of Hermione's inner thoughts. It seldom fails to amuse me when I read a chapter. Nicely done.
schedule December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, lets try again. For some reason firefox doesn't want to review. But this time I at least copied the review before I tried to send it so... oh, well. HELL! I left such a nice review and it all just disappeared! DAMN AFF really doesn't want people reviewing. Why do they have to make everything so insanely difficult? Oh, well... I said something about, haha, Hermione has spent too much time with Voldemort, using illegal curses like that. Hehe, and I can so relate to her feelings about wanting to be happy over something, but just not be able too... so annoying. Hmhm... and then I'm very curious to see what Dumbledore and Hermione will talk about. Guess there will be some Legilimency from Dumbledore's side? Oh, and does he know Hermione and Voldemort have been having sex? Hehe, can't wait to see his face when he finds out that.
Hehe... seems like Voldemort will get a chance to take over the Ministry now? Mehe
Oooh, and Gellert is looking handsome. Do I see some old-men-smut coming up? Haha, can't wait! I wonder if Voldemort will use that spell on himself? Hehe... good-looking Voldemort is always nice!
I'm so glad you updated! And just when I was done with my essay too! Wiiih! Such a nice treat! Hope you'll find the inspiration to update soon again! Take care and Happy New Year!
schedule December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter! And I was sooo bored :)
hehe, such interesting books. I wonder what Dumbledore will say.. oh, he didn't seem to bothered by it. Oh, well. But no, Hermione doesn't strike me as the type to read romantic novells. Maybe in the bathroom when she find herself stuck for a while and her mother or something has left one there... or something like that.
Oh, how fun if Voldemort had picked up thoughts now and again about what Hermione are thinking. He probably has.
Mehe, Voldemort seemed to be able to protect Hermione quite well. Ooh, Dumbledore thinks she is wearing a horocrux! Is she? Haha, I just love how sarcastic she is! Yes, lets everyone try and kill Hermione! wiiih! Gah, why are Hermione so surprised Dumbledore used a dark spell? he isn't a saint...
Oh, what an interesting form of Occlumency. I wonder how Voldemort will react when he realise what Hermione has learned. Hehe.
Hm... that is an interesting conversation between Dumby and Ljudmila. What are they keeping that make someone from the light be glad that at least the dark side is powerful? Hm... has to be something rather spectacular. Hm... the powers? Wilder?
person FA-AL
schedule December 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit I was reading both of your atemts of this story, here and at fanfiction.net I'm really impressed how you managed it to leave out parts of your storyline there and still tie all the knots together.

Awesome story, I cant wait to read on.
person Anon
schedule December 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nerys...you know that you're awesome & that i love your work, right?
person Lora
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I check it all the time to see if you have updated (her at adultfan and fanfiction). I know that you have this thing called a life and I cant chain you to your computer so I can have daily updates *sigh* So from from one fan of hermione and voldemort to another you have one ass kicking story!

Thanks for giving me something worth reading!!

Mama Shireman
person PurpleDungarees
schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay ^^ I think that this is a fantastic original story you've written, and I can't wait to read the rest (:
PurpleDungarees
schedule November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My roommate stumbled onto this story when it was being featured on the front area. Neither one of us read Hermione/Vlodemort stories and probably wouldn't have if she had realized it the beging what it was. But she thought the plot sounded intresting and didn't even look at the pairing so she read it. After listening to her go on and on about it for two days I read it. Your plot and story writing has made an impossable pairing more real then some of the others I have read. Please update soon as we would like to know what is going on. I know find my self not knowing if I want to see the Dark Lord dead or not. Your scary good. Oh and more Luna please. We love her driving her guid nuts.
person Saff
schedule November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story!!!
It's so different to other fics i've read, and the characters are really well done.
Why has the necklace turned black??