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I love this story!!! This is one of my favorites!!! I can't wait till there is more interaction between Hermione and Voldemort. I especially like seeing when Voldemort gets all protective of Hermione, especially when she could be in serious trouble. I can't wait for your next chapter!!!

I've been really enjoying this story, it's addicting, well written with a well thought out plot.

Wishing you great ideas for the future.

Yay! New chapter! Just before bedtime as well, wiih!
HAHAHA! Like Voldemort has ever been innocent. That would be like calling snow hot. I love snow... Naw, is Draco turning into a good boy? Tsk, tsk. And Bella gets her memory altered. Perhaps Voldemort would consider making her forget to talk all together so she won't be able to speak of what she happens to see now and again? Oh, she is that trusted. Baah. Poor Draco, he is in for some pain. Mehe!
Haha, Gellert is causing a lot of panic!
Okay, something werid just happened and Luna was out of phase (that is sooo from Stargate! Or at least from the SF-industy. I've never heard that expression elsewhere) and Gellert saved her for some reason and then Natharia speaks parsel and in comes a basilisk. Hm... Weird. Oh, and now Luna is being tortured. Hm.... I'm wondering if this isn't a darling you should have killed. Or will it all be reviled in chapter 39 or something? :P I know you usually have some plan for everything you write, but sometimes I wonder if you need so many deatiles about so many things. Okay.. maybe I should follow my own advice on that but... well, you know ^^
Ugh... boys indeed...HAHA and Hermione is on a revenge mission. You are really managing to turn her dark slow and gracefully. And I'm sure Voldemort will react just like that when he discovers Hermione's grade. Mehe. Poor girl, not getting the highest mark in a ll subjects.
"And he hadn't even "slept" with Voldemort... well, for as far as she knew. Though, she supposed he had killed for the man, which in her opinion was worse than having sex with him." HAHA! Oh, I have actually read a story where Voldemort and Snape has sex, and Voldemort wanted to be the bottom. For some reason I don't think your Voldemort would like that ;) But I think I agree with Hermione.... killing for someone else is just... well, I think you should take responsibilites for your own actions. And I also think, from a moral standard, that it's completely wrong that the leaders doesn't fight their own battles in the western world. Baaah.
Naw, Hermione is feeling guilty first, but then she gives Harry no credit at all in fighting Voldemort. Hehe. But oh, well, she is right when it comes to skills of course... But it's fun to read it from Hermione's point of view. You really do meddle well with the real story :)
Haha, that about Voldemort and the pimpels made me laugh as well!
Really nice chapter. But now I'm starting to look forward to some Hermione/Voldemort action! Want to see what will happen between them :D Wiiih! Take care

I am really starting to hate LV and dislike Hermione....it seems she's so easily swayed by the darkness (LV, to be precise) and doesn't care that much about Light, Order, Harry, etc. I don't know....I kind of thought that to be fair (even if Snape's not really fair) and knowing that Snape's the spy for the Order, Hermione would actually DO something to save/protect/something him. I actually like your Gellert and Albus and Mei-Li. And really, this is the only chapter so far that's elicited such strong negative response from me, I really loved the rest of it. Will keep reading more and hope that I'll feel differently about Hermione and possible LV, because right now I sort of despise Hermione (all her 'powerful' magic seems to be contrived and at dispense and manipulation of LV and for a powerful witch she's awfully easily swayed and most of the time seems to not even attempt to resist him....except in S/D scene of course, where she gets pleasure from the punishment for insubordination) and LV..well, he's supposed to be utterly evil, ain't he? so I really had no 'good' expectations for/of him.

was hoping for some juicy bits

was hoping for some juicy bits

Hello...I have never reviewed a story before but I have read alot of yours. I don't have a creative bone in my body so I don't write any stories so I feel weird reviewing them. I really loved Masters of Manipulation. I just wanted to share something that everyone else thought was funny. On Septemeber 27th 2009 I was in the hospital in labor with my daughter Emily. I had been so in pain and my mom had brought her laptop. I stole it and greedly looked up anything to do with LV/HG pairing. I had been without internet for a few months. I found this story and happily read it while in labor. I had no meds but while reading my favorite pairing I was okay. The nurse came in to check me and was crowning while reading. Two pushes later my daughter was born. I guess I just wanted to thank you for bringing relief to one of the hardest things I have ever done. Please forgive mistakes...typing while feeding is alittle tricky.
Becky

because I'm not too bright, it has taken me this long to figure out how to review on this site, so now I'm able to say what I've been thinking ever since I got hooked by your beautiful style:

I love your stories, to date I've not found another writer in the rather bizarre world that is the Harry Potter fandom that writes like you do. The intensity with which you create life into these characters always makes me impatient at the end of each chapter to see what happens next, and being a confirmed book worm that is something I highly value in my reading - in short I've been rather wordy in telling you that I love your stuff!

And lastly, your take on the character of tom/lv - the way you capture this character, is the main reasons i fell for this fandom ;)


cheers,

E.

I'm enjoying this story SOOO MUUUCH!!! I haven't been this excited about one in a long time, good work, really. I particularly love how you portray Gellert, its so funny. All in all, is a witty, fun and complex story, including the lemons.
I can't wait for the next chapter. Happy 2010!

Loved it (even though the differences between FF.net and this were small) :D I don't have anything interesting or new to say, apart from I will be waiting for the next update :D