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for The Apprentice

by Nerys

schedule July 27, 2025 at 12:00 AM

I've only read one other story that was, in any way, as compelling as this one.  The Billion Dollar Harem.

I LOVE the Harry Potter films.  I've never read the books... but I must compliment you on a wonderful (ongoing I hope) novel.... of sorts.  A week ago the idea of Hermione Granger and Lord Voldamort even having a conversation, let alone a full scale relationship would have been utterly laughable... In so much as the conversation would be short.  Voldamort rapes the mudblood and then kills her just to hurt Harry Potter.... Make him angry enough to confront the Dark Lord so he can be killed.

That being said, the idea of a secret group of "Keepers", Dark and Light, and Voldamort being tasked with training Hermione as his Apprentice is GENIUS!  I genuinely laughed out loud many times as the pair verbally sparred and you gain insight into Voldamort that you can't get from the films.... maybe the books but not the films.

At any rate, the sexual situations are GRIPPING and highly erotic... and adding that element to an already well written story makes this not only highly enjoyable to read but difficult to put down, as they say.  Watching The Dark Lord slowly but surely turn Hermione to the Dark Side much in the way Palpatine turned Anakin is delicious.... adding a sexual element as he dominates her also quite thrilling.  Plus (unlike my writing) it's not all sex.  Now don't get me wrong.... I have story too, but my stories are pretty much sex with a story vs some of the folks who write a quick story about fucking.  I try to use real characters and have them speak as they would from their respective shows.  I think I do pretty well in that aspect.  However this story was fantastic and I'm truly disappointed that I've completed all the current chapters.  I'm anxious to see what happens to Hermione.  Is she going to eventually switch sides?  She has certainly done a number of things that are "unforgiveable" so it would make sense that she can't turn back now.... BUT, her love for her friends, Harry, Ron, Ginny et al.... Is that enough to pull her back from the brink of disaster?

I applaud you for the time and energy it took to write this.  I thank you for the exellent prose.  WELL DONE!!!

schedule October 28, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Absolutely entrancing story, as usual from Nerys...what's it going to take to finish it?? I'm having withdrawals!! 

person Eiaj
schedule July 6, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Thanks for the thrilling read, I enjoyed it immensely!
Hope to learn how it ends one day!^^

person TJovanka
schedule May 13, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Hi there just want to thank you for your amazing story. It’s sad to notice that you haven’t updated in like seven years but I’ll always be here whenever you decide to come back. It’s too good a story to be abandoned. 

schedule January 9, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Absolutely one of my favorite stories on this site and with this paring! Beautifully written and incredibly interesting! My only complaint is that I wish it would be updated and for the author to finally give me the answers to all of the plot questions that I have!! 

schedule July 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I love love LOVE this story.....need....update!!! Pretty please??? With sprinkles and a naked dark lord on top?? Lol

person kiviana
schedule October 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
We miss you. It's been so long since you updated here or fan fiction.net. This story is spectacular and well written. It's a shame you stopped. Please consider coming back.
person Mkey
schedule February 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You make a constant mistake:
"for awhile" = "for for a while"
Please edit those to " for a while"
person Anon
schedule February 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
"Dumbledore could care less. "
UGH. Idiotic.
It is "I could NOT care less" when you do NOT care at all.
Do you say "I could agree more" when you can't agree any more?
schedule January 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hi
i am new to this site and i have no idea how to actually work it which means i dont know how to follow this story. i would appreciate it if you could either email me when you next up date or, better yet, email me instructions on how to follow it.
i think your story is great and i which it was on fanfiction.net because i know how to work that one lol.
i love it and i cant wait for each and every next chapter.
if my email hasnt appeared its gemini_rose_16@hotmail.co.uk
Gemini xx