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for Darkness Within

by neelix

schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How very sad, but i still cant wait for updates because i think although this story is different its very good. After all life aint just one big happy bubble and the way you are dealing with this is both realistic and full of hope.

See you tomorrow morning neelix ;)

Love
Jocy
person Muffy
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You weren't kidding about dark. I wish I had something insightful and intelligent to say...sorry. I think you are handling the storyline delicately and doing it justice. Thanks for the updates.
person KellyJCR
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please don't ever apologize for a long chapter,I am quite fond of them. I love the fact that Severus doesn't seem so quick to jump at slight by Hermione and the way some things just fly out of her mouth without thinking. I can't wait for you to breech the subject of what has happened to her. I am curious and from a comment I heard before I think it had something ot do with her parents. So before I really start to ramble great job love the story so far. Looking forward to an update.
person neelix
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, just wanted to say thanks for the reviews and I'm glad people are enjoying the story.

;)

narcissa'a sister : you are spot on, with a twist!
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is very differnt from what you wrote so far and i gotta admit i was not sure if i liked it at the beginning because i really dont like "slutty" Hermione, but it turned out i was wrong.
The way this develops has me really interested and i LOVE protective Severus especially when he is helping Hermione deal with a tough time. and what a tough time she has. I cant wait to see what is behind her behaviour change and how Severus will help her through and out of it in the end.
Please keep up the fantastic work and i am SO looking forward to your updates (as usual lol)

Love
Jocy
person ismene5
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Love the story.
person Muffy
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update!
person ismene5
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story.
Can't wait to know what happened to Hermione.
person noeby
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, interesting start. Looking forward to more.
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So intense. I'm really loving this.