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for Darkness Within

by neelix

schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, all this crying actually makes it hard to breathe. You are a genius in how you bring their emotions across!
person Muffy
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked the letters. And the last, how lovely and romantic. Brilliant. Thanks for the updates.
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww, Hermione is SSSSSO stupid at times. She should know Severus better !
On the other hand its good for her to get out for a while. But i sincerely hope that she comes running back home soon, or he comes running to her. Who cares about education if you have Severus at home pining for you ;)

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Jocy
person KellyJCR
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why is he being like that. Is this because he feels shuned by her. Severus did after all support the idea of her going back to school. Maybe he wanted her to go under his own circumstances, Severus can be quite the control freak. Anyway you have me worried about Hermiones return I don't know what you have planned but, I do know that you are fan of the happy ending. Great job as usual and can't wait for an update.
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, i knew he would look bad once she left, he is so emotional when it comes to his well being. I love it !!!

Thanks for the speedy updates, i can't wait to read more.

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Jocy
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY YAY YAY

*does the Severus loves Hermione dance*

You ROCK, neelix !!! That was SO heartbreaking *chokes back a sob*

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Jocy
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, ive been reading this story but hadnt had a chance to comment on it

I love it :D

loved the letters n how their relationship developed :D

yei love the fast updates :D

awesome story!
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is excellent. I am glad that Severus finally told Hermione not to leave him again. I look forward to reading more.
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's about time that they revealed their feelings for one another. They are both too damn stubborn for their own good.

I really like how you have done Hermione's healing process with Severus. I think it was so important for her to move past the horrors in her life before she could comfortably be with him.

I can't wait to see what sort of lemons you will have in store for us.

Thanks for the great story!