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Here is a link for the animals in the Harry potter Verse. http://www.harrypotterfanzone.com/?ID=info/creatures
I think you could add a lot if snape was buckbeak or at least a Hippogryph. or an Augurey. His name could be "secret" or maybe "wings".

As for the prison here are a few words for you to arrange as you see fit.
Tuor - Anguish / Celebrindal - cage / Tur-anion - pit / Calmcacil - hole / Calanor - repentant / Ru'mil (accent above the U) - forever / Lo'lindir - dark / Elanesse.. (accests of 2 dots above the last e)- eternal.

maybe a black raven or you can go but what they teesed him and make him a bat? as to a nick name maybe onyx for the raven because of his color?

Oh how wonderful!!! I can't wait for chapter 11!!!

This is really good so far. James, Lily, and Narcissa are back! That was awesome. I loved that Draco accepted Harry's proposal! More please!!!!!!!!!

I truly like this story, however I was hoping that maybe you could put Harry and Draco's relationship a bit more... affectionately!? They just seem so cold to be in a loving and caring relationship. This last chapter you may it so that it seem so, but in the previous they sometimes don't even seem like a couple.

Love how you brought James, Lily and Narcissa back; it's different. I can't wait to for the babies to be born. Are you going to make them identical twins or fraternal's? Are they going to be boys or girls or maybe one of each? Uh... better yet don't tell me, I rather find out as I read along ^_^ can't wait.

Keep up the great work ^_~ Please update chapter 11 soon.

Jan

this story is AMAZING!!!!! keep up the good work...can wait for more!