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for Broomsticks and the Big Apple

by TempestLore

schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I just love updates!
And I loved this chappy! Super great. I feel so.... horrible for poor Hermione and Draco. I'm glad that the Professor took the time to talk to Luke, and Drew, too. He needs to know he's not alone.. More please!
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor Luke...he's thinking to be invisible for whole life?? poor boy with his teenage problem :P i bet everyone would feel different from their family member or even friends and takes it as it was the worst thing of life when we were in that age! haha

anyway i really like this chapter when Scorpious turned to the walking-torch ...it made me thinking of my fav movie "Fantastic 4" hehe

keep updating! cheers!
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I'm so happy for Scorpius! I really like Persephone, she seems like a sweety. Hermione gave some good advice, too, if she came back, she was a keeper, that was true.
Poor 'Mione, being all worried over Luke, I hope Draco finds him and kicks his ass a bit, for worrying Mione so much. Great chapter, can't wait for more!
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh!! More, please! I have to know what is happening to Luke and Scorpius. I'm sooo very glad Scorpius didn't hook up with Serena, though. I like Persephone! More more more more please!!! :)

Oh, and I'm really glad Draco and Mione are better now, too!
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, seems i misunderstood that Draco knew Hermione knew French man was him lol ok...getting more trouble again...

plz can't wait what's going on next!!!
person smmz79
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a great chap i love how you are developing the kids personality.... you are doing awesomw ans i think that i would like to be tried in dracos court..... looking forward to your merlins coven update, and just let us know if you use fanfiction primarily i would still like to read your stories and i will go over there if i have too... :)
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it would have been very frustrated! arg...i like lemon so far but they kept playing hard to get to each other! (i meant that they still don't talk yet)

plz..let them talk again soon :)

anyway i didn't imagine that there will be the pompous bastard (uh..no he has a father) in this American Wizard school too....oh but it's reasonable lol

keep updating!
person Samantha
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahahahaha what a great chapter!!!! I KNEW it was Hermione beneath the Russian's cloak of mystery!!!!!!!!!


:):):) fabulous. MORE PLEASE!!!
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet chapter!

schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha, that's really a big surprise! ...i like this chap a lot xD...who thought Hermione would come with that Russian girl plan xD

can't wait for next update!