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for Broomsticks and the Big Apple

by TempestLore

person jaimelee
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I remember reading your fifth Broomstick story... w/ Draco singing to an audience; but where did it go?
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just wondering what happened to #5 in the Broomsticks series.... ?
Is is coming back?
person Cil
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey, i'm still looking for number five of the broomsticks series. is it still coming out?
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wonderful wonderful wonderful!!! Luke got Drew pregnant?! He should have listened to Scorpius!!! And Mione got her voice back, yay Draco! Oh sheesh, just great! Loved it!
person smmz79
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok i know that i am going to sound soooo stupid when i say this but i started to tear up at the end... how perfect... and i remember the second story broomstick and alibis when they were sitting in that tavern and was it hermione or draco that wondered if their love would ever be like the inn keepers love that they shared... well i guess they got their answer oh and you used the same song how wonderful... so they are going to have a girl how wonderful... oh and luke is going to be a dad this is going to be interesting how will hermione and draco take becoming grandparents... great ending to the story and i am so happy that you are starting another one... i am going to jump over and read that one now, i am excited... oh and i just loved the counseling session go figure draco would not like all of the attention on him, i loved how he flustered the counselor that was hysterical and that thought he had at the end of the session how very true... fantastic story and if you say that this next one is going to be your best one then i am definitely excied... oh and harry and ginny omg
person koneko-chan
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh goodness, Drew's pregnant? I can't wait to see what happens in the next part of the series. I really like what you've done with these stories. The plots are great and I can't stop reading. Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next store to be up.
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! it's a very nice chap :D love it!

aww...but Luke got Drew pregnant?? arg...that's really shocked lol what to do now ...okay i guess i have to find out next story

although i love this series so much but i think it's better that u considered to put the next story as the last one of this series coz if it's too much...i might be bored -_-' anyway i still love to read ur any other fiction :)

don't let us waiting too long!

luv <3
person Priscilla
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome last chapter, caught me by surprise can't way to read the next series =)
person smmz79
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chap as always.... so draco wants a little girl, wouldn't that be a nice christmas present from hermione.... i hope the potion works i am looking forward to seeing if it does... looking forward to the next chap....
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that's really ridiculous! they got caught shagging there! haha..

i love this chap...especially when Draco noticed little Jessie, was she really a squib or she was just too young?

i think i now like when Hermione can't speak coz it makes another characters got their own dialogues too :P

can't wait to read final chap now! Christmas in July...lol anyway it cooled me off coz it's rainy season and a bit hot here in Thailand!

oh...may be next story u'll include some trip of Malfoy's to somewhere in Thailand too :) i know some exotic place :P

good day <3