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for A Summer Holiday

by TwistOfLime

schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a sweet story and blasie at the ending of the last chappy, I laughed so hard, draco is about to get some competition, and atleast he is trying to be nice, and I love narcissa in this one as well. Please update soon. Keep up the good work.
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww, they ended up cuddled together to sleep. =) i love sweet moments like that. A summer play? Will they get involved with it, will Hermione see that Draco is actually great with kids? And Blaise is there? Hmmm, i see a bit of jealousy perhaps on Draco's part of Blaise begins to show Hermione some romantic interest. Can't wait to see what happens next....

LadyB
xoxo
person Rosamund
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Different...but still awaiting a certain scene, and then MORE!!! :)
person Rosamund
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! And yes, I did detect some changes ;) And I certainly cannot wait for new new stuff to come into play!!!
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay for the update....=) i love the spark between draco and hermione..i think you've written it perfectly. the kiss has apparently shocked both of them nd i can;t wait to see where this new development leads them...

Lady B
xoxo
person Tootsie
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story. waiting you update =D
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, so we catch a glimpse of a girl who looks an awful lot like the girl in Draco's fantasy...and she just happens to resemble Hermione...LOL, poor Draco, he doesn't realize it but he is done for. And Blaise, i love that he is egging on Draco, and I wonder if he will pop up during their holiday and give Draco a run for his money once Draco realizes its Hermione he wants. Great update! Hope to read more soon!

Lady B
xoxo
person Rosamund
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I remember this! For YEARS have been waiting for more...are you continuing?!! I should read any AN if there...I just got excited when saw the title and scanned to make sure the same story (but with more in the first chapter?!!). I have this printed...been wondering and have checked from time to time if more chapters. Awesome!!!
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*hugs back* it was magical! i neeed more...thank you!
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wonderful chapter, i was surprised over who narcissa's guest was, i really thought it would have been hermione, great twist there! i am sure narcissa will get draco to go on holiday, mothers can make their children do all sorts of things they don't want to...lol. can;t wait to read what's next! keep up the good work!

Lady B
xoxo