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for A Summer Holiday

by TwistOfLime

schedule June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well done chapter.keep up the great work. I really do feel sorry for Draco.
person colao
schedule June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this fic!
schedule June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm sorry you won't be able to update as quickly, but I just want you to not give up. So far, this is a really engaging story and I look forward to more! For instance, what is Blaise doing there?! lol Thank you, HG4eva
person colao
schedule June 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
take your time, we'll be here when you post. thoroughly enjoying your fic, btw.
schedule June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ahhh its getting more exciting i love it!! and lumps? bahaha i like that more draco with muggle stuff please! x
schedule June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was truly, completely, and utterly beautiful. Thank you. HG4eva
schedule June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like you're AU setting and am happy to suspend disbelief in Naricissa and Hermione's mother having been friends (though I think in England it might be called Primary School, then it gets complex I believe, even within that structure). All willing to give into because of your structure, style and strong writing. I'm enjoying this.

I'm confused about two things: is the war over? how is it safe for Hermione's mother to be at the Manor? when you noted in first chapter than Harry vouched for Draco, is that post war? Was that a memory? Sorry, am a touch confused on the timeline.

Thanks. :-)
schedule June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
thank you for clearing up the timeline...now I get it.

I don't know that your Draco isn't canon - he's not all that nice, still short-sighted, a prat and bully. I like him like that...and Blaise seems haughty in all the right ways to me. I don't know if you're too far off from canon. Again, I continue to be drawn in.
person Anon
schedule June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is a really cute story so far i hope you do continue it.
schedule June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i love cissa in this story!:-)