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July 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh. I do not like draco in this
Severus1snape
Severus1snape
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know...after reluctantly reading and getting to the end, I've come to the
conclusion that you are in some ways...truly, subtly morbid...in the way
you describe things in your summary.
Because, for a good 5 minutes, I thought for SURE this was a story that was
going to end badly, with either someone dying OR being beaten to death. I
REALLY did have that impression.
But, despite that, ALL I can say is this story seemed more like a...slice of
life between two men who are trying to find some common ground in their
relationship where trust is key.
Eye-opening would be a good way to describe their story here.
...and with that I end this review.
conclusion that you are in some ways...truly, subtly morbid...in the way
you describe things in your summary.
Because, for a good 5 minutes, I thought for SURE this was a story that was
going to end badly, with either someone dying OR being beaten to death. I
REALLY did have that impression.
But, despite that, ALL I can say is this story seemed more like a...slice of
life between two men who are trying to find some common ground in their
relationship where trust is key.
Eye-opening would be a good way to describe their story here.
...and with that I end this review.
schedule
July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"That was all right. Harry had cast a spell on Flint in retaliation that caused him to have random orgasms in public for a week."
*giggles* That's got to be one of my favorite lines in a story. Ever.
I always find it interesting how your writing style shifts and really reflects the version of Harry and Draco you want to portray. Harry's patience and *lack* of a guilt complex (for once, haha) allow you to write almost sarcastically, in a very matter-of-fact type way throughout this oneshot, and I really enjoyed it :)
*giggles* That's got to be one of my favorite lines in a story. Ever.
I always find it interesting how your writing style shifts and really reflects the version of Harry and Draco you want to portray. Harry's patience and *lack* of a guilt complex (for once, haha) allow you to write almost sarcastically, in a very matter-of-fact type way throughout this oneshot, and I really enjoyed it :)
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very well done. That was great seeing Harry and Draco (Well more Harry anyway) acting like reasonable adults. Actually talking instead of scheming and guessing - although I do like the stories where they are, I'm rather fond of drawn out coming togethers. But I thoroughly enjoyed this story, as I do everything you write, you never fail to impress. I don't know how you keep coming up with new and wonderful material...your like a freakin fanfic god.
thanks and I can't wait for you next story!
thanks and I can't wait for you next story!
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope it works out for them!
schedule
July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So cute.. I liked it very much... just, cute.
Cat
Cat
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As always, you are brilliant. I simply adored your neurotic and vulnerable Draco, and your confident and charming Harry. A great "trying to recover from war and piece your life back together again" fic. Well done!
Loves!
Roo
Loves!
Roo