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for Verander

by xXBrokenDreamsXx

person hachan
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sounds interesting so far. Hope you will update soon^^
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like it. Harry Potter: a breeder. ha
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update I am so curious as to how this is going to turn out, and how this (I am assuming I know what has happend) actually came to be.
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope the thing I think is happening is happening here. But I guess I have to wait for the story to go there. MORE!
person SP777
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'll tell you RIGHT now, if you keep this story as interesting as the first chapter
was, I'll follow this story to the end, regardless of whether or not I review.
person avihenda
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this fist chapter is kind of annoying because you don't really get to know anything and there isn't enough information to begin with so you don't really know if it's going to be good or not. So I'm going to give this a couple of chapters more before I decide if I liked it or not. But it dose look promicing. :-)
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 2!!! Stupid Minister of Magic!!! Should have bound their memories and magic and charmed them to return when it was over. *sigh*
person Vittani
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well i thought this was a brilliant start. Cant wait to see where you're going with this.

Can you email me when you update please?

vittani@aol.com