rate_review Reviews

As interesting as I'm finding this story, I feel like you went from 'A' to 'C'
and completely left out 'B'.

Why is Harry in whatever-the-place-is-called, instead of being in ''normal'' society?

The locals couldn't be THAT bad against people like Harry, could they?

That's hilarious. Oh I can't wait to see how Malfoy "snatches" Harry up. Oh it's going to be brilliant. Oh I hope he has twins or triplets. That would make it even better. Awesome story so far. Don't forget to update.

hi, i think you have an interesting story. im not tryin to be a flamer, but if you have any pride in your work you should take the time to proofread it, no matter how long it takes. even though us readers will complain, if its a great story we'll wait as long as possible. thanks :)

Poor, poor Harry... but i wouldn't say no to Draco after me ^_^
email me when you update please: narcoleptic86@gmail.com

Jeez, Harry's screwed. Again. And literally soon enough. *cackles*
Really interesting story. Since Draco's in the elite group, is Lucius running the whole show?
update!

OK, I'm really loving this story, and I have a few things to say, so if I babble, it's not my fault, OK? lol. Firstly I'd like to just rave about the whole breeding camps idea. I've seen it pop up once or twice before, I don't remember the exact fic but I think I read a really good Harry/Snape on The Silver Snitch. Other than that it's a virtually original field, which I love reading about. It reminds you of WW2 almost, and I have a passionate interest in all things history. So far conditions don't seem to be anything like a Nazi concentration camp however. I think I might have raved about this in a review for the last chapter? I just got a strong sense of de ja vu as i was writing and I was like, did I review this the other day? Anyway. I just wanted to comment on your word 'Praesuls' - it sounds like a mix of Praetor and Consul from ancient Roman politics, and in context the mix of the two would make some sense in the context you are using it in. I'm not sure about the word used for what Harry is however, lol.

Well, I cant wait to see an appearance of Malfoy. It would be good also to see some scenes of Harry rebelling and what happens when he does. Surprisingly I was just waiting for him to punch Marcus in this chapter. So, I'm going to wait with baited breath for Harry to punch one of the Praesuls. lol.

good work, looking forward to more!
~gorgeousbowneyes

Update aplenty!

Wow-- what an interesting idea. I'm really looking forward to this story-- can't wait to see more! Nice job.

continue!

Intriguing plot...now I'm really curious what's happening next. You are a meanie - giving us just a little teaser. But it's oh-so-well done. Go back to work, feed us more.
Anyway... thanks for sharing.