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by xXBrokenDreamsXx

person qwerty
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ACK! Harry! Where's your spine! You're suppose to give Malfoy hell BEFORE submitting to him! *shakes head*
I really hope there's something more going on with Malfoy than just the pretty looks to make Harry lose his fighting spirit.
Great chapter. I'm glad that your computer situation worked out.
update!
person sam
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this...update asap please
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooo... I wonder what happens. Does he break Neville's rules and sleep with Draco? O.o Or, wait! Is the icecream place off the gounds?! Uhuh...
person Storm
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Hope you continue this story. Can't wait to see more. Keep up the good work!!
person Everdean
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooo i really like this story, carry on the good work :)
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Write more soon, yes? It's going in my bookmarks. I'm curious to see how this will play out, especially since this is different than anything I have ever read before. While light and not as domineering, this story has an edge to it that I highly admire. But I'm not going to judge fully until I see how you write Draco into this. :D I was thinking, if it's okay to state my opinion, that Harry wouldn't give in as easily as Draco would like? I realize it's obvious from the ending of Chapter Two that Harry's not all that happy with this new situation, but I've seen potentially good stories go to waste when Harry just bends over when Draco snaps his fingers, even after thinking that Harry would put up a fight.

A five star rating to you, though, for coming up with a unique plot! I applaude you! -Claps- See? :D Great story, cannot wait to see more.

Slashy Snitch
person Vittani
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey thanks for emailing me, i'm sorry it took me so long to get round to reading the chapter. It was brilliant by the way, a little short but that doesnt matter. Cant wait for the next chapter.
person kittenonabroomstick
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Despite my grinning face, I have to say: poor Harry. What has he done to deserve this? >points to evil author... no worries, I like you like this< He rescued them all and now he is subjected to a treatment like he was an object, not a person.
To say it short: that was great!
Please continue ASAP.
... and thank you so much for the quick update.
person Jilliane
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapters 1 & 2)

Ooh, looks like its going to be good! Please update soon! Can't wait!
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I sooo need chapter 3!!!!