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Crap.. what seemed to start out as a perfectly innocent chapter with even Narcissa having the most ingenius pun time turns around to bite off a really big chunk!! Damn it... after that lovely scene with Harry and Draco that is totally out of focus now because of these DAMN healers... they're in definite need of someone who sets their heads straight about what profession they actually started out on!! It's ment to be about saving lives, not conspire to end them... pfft. Sonsofabitches... (sorry, I know I'm cussing quite a bit lately.. bad habit taken on from tv show characters... )
Cat

I truly love this story from the beginning chapter to the recent. I was always looking for a interesting shounen-ai story between Draco and Harry and this story pleasantly surprised me with brilliant writing, realistic portrayals of characters, and great characterization. Everything was well-written and the story was able to captivate me more with chapter. I truly love how each chapter fills like a cliffhanger and leaves me aching to know more. I thank you for this brilliant story because I needed a pleasant distraction when I was feeling down.

OMG i hate clffies

Omg!!! How could you stop it there! I'm going to cry now, grr.

I found it ironic because Harry has always been adamant on not being a leader or hero and he doesn't realize he always had been.

I can't understand how such a intricate spell could have been placed on him without his knowledge. Not to flame but it seems odd that if these conspirators or the administrators wanted to get even to Malfoy for taking away the donation, why would they go to such lengths to cause his suffering? Wouldn't that also give him the factor of time to find out who placed the spell on him? Or were they planning on him not receiving the right type of treatment?
Sorry for so many questions, I tend to be annoying when I'm stressed from cliffhangers

Oh, shit... *wince* Lucius... It figures the evil SOBs would set up a trigger for the potion. *sigh* *grin* I figured Hermione would approve of the positive changes in Harry, even though she doesn't know the extent of his situation with the Malfoys. At least with 'Mione on the case we know we'll get resualts. As for Harry and Draco's interaction in this chapter... *grin* In one word, Brilliant. It's about time those two took a slightly bigger step forward. Who knows, things keep going so well between them and Draco will be in Harry's bed shortly after he saves Lucius. *happy nod* Excellent chap! More Please! ASAP! ASAP ASAP ASAP!!!

poor lucius! that really has got to suck. i hope the damage isn't too lasting. i, starting to like the bastard

Wow, go figure, another trap. I feel sorry for poor Lucius!

Please update chapter 18 soon ^_^

Jan

Amazing. I really like this fic. very few mulit-chapter fics have a well thought out plot and character roles. You have done magificently. 16 chapters and ever word has made sense and conincides with the rest. I don't usually review because most other fics are not up to my standards. But this, this is novel material. I utterly look foreward to future chapters. Thank-you for such a lovely story.

He He He I just love that House elf!! He's so kick butt ^__^ the healer is a jurk and diserves whatever Draco wants to do to him! Grrrrrr ^__^ Wonderful chapter

I find it ironic the way Harry slowly morphed into who he is now. He's become more of a leader and yet not afriad to keep his principles and compassion. I still find Pontiff suspicious though, I mean it always seems the ones we trust the most may have the biggest secret hidden in the shadows.