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this was quite interesting! I hope you write more!

I take great delight in that starter... should become a marvelous Lomona-plot like we know and love them!! I can't wait for the continuation of that really inciting game between Harry and his environment.. I hope the Healer Emptydickhead gets whats coming for him!!
Cat

I like your first chapter. I'm curious about where you take it next.

(Chapter 1)



"Invictus" is one of my favourite pieces of poetry, so I had to have a look at this, but when I saw who the author was, I knew it would be good. It's an interesting start and that was a very novel approach to diagnostic spells!! Brilliant. At this point Draco seems fairly petty and immature...I hope he grows up soon. Narcissa is her typical icy self, and Lucius.....well, he seems to be the only one with a clear head, or any confidence or trust in Harry's abilities, regardless that Harry is seemingly the only one who will treat him. I like this calm and patient Harry, rather thoughtful...and I also like it that he isn't perfect. He couldn't make it to Healer nor Auror because his Potions grade was good enough, and he can't seem to sustain a relationship. Nice. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Soooo need chapter 2!!! Fantastic beginning!