rate_review Reviews

about the story...

You know, I think I can HONESTLY say, after all the fanfiction I've read, that I
prefer a Lucius who is cool, calm and devious. Sadistic, I can do without.

Have you ever played with idea of doing a story where Lucius & Harry had to team
up and fight together? Could you pull it of???


PS- let me ask you this before I forget again, considering the way you write, you
wouldn't by chance have a career where you write or maybe be involved in English
Literature of some sort...OR maybe you just do a lot of paperwork? :-)

I like this one. I agree it's nice to see Harry as the Healer for a change and the use of Lucius is a good idea.

You are quite humorous. That was subtle humor at it's best. I am loving it. I can't wait to see what happens between Draco and Harry. I hope at the end of this story that Draco helps Harry learn potions and can pass his healer exam and then shove it into Emptyweed's face. Thank you for writting, please update soon,.

i like this. its different. harry isn't doing so well in his chosen career. so often he is pictured a the top of whatever feild an author chooses. i look forward to reading more.

yay! Second chapter was everything I could hope for. I'm really happy about the stories flow. It dosn't slow down but it dosn't feel stressed. Very nice! I'm really liking the harry's interactions with Lucius. He's acting as if he is just another patient, but one that needs a bit more attention. I can imagine Lucius dosn't get that very often, just being a person and not a Malfoy first. :-)
Keep it up!

Oh wow... You've done it again, Lom!!! I'm speechless and totally anxious for the next chapter!!! You always have THE most original plots...and honestly, I never, EVER thought I'd read a chapter where Harry is discussing his sex life with Lucius Malfoy...regardless of whether said sex life includes Lucius' son or not...which at this point, it doesn't, but that's okay.

And OMFG "Because you can't rape the willing?" That was BRILLIANT!!! I read that, and (I'm in the library) I nearly jumped up and screamed out loud, which would've been bad. LOL But anyway, I just wanted to let you know that I can appreciate the use of that phrase there. Nicely done!

I love the way Harry observes the interaction between Lucius and Draco (and figures out stuff about Draco based on it)...more of that, please!!! LOL Great start! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Hoorah! Another story from an excellent and reliable author.

As always, another brilliant story from you! Thanks for it.... great first two chapters. Love it!

Soooo need chapter 3!!!

Another interesting chapter. I like Harry's personality. He seems a lot more mature and self assured.