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for Bloody But Unbowed

by Lomonaaeren

person SP777
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
about the story...

As I get further into this, it seems to me like this a new direction for you,
especially with Draco's character. Compared to other stories you've done where
Draco was serious & poised [ignores the horror story], this portrayal of Draco
that you are doing seems to be on the..light-hearted & playfully mischievious
side and it feels like you're still developing which way he will go next.

Am I right?

Other than that, it's a good story and I am curious to see whether Harry will crack or not....of course, that pertains to his sanity dealing with Draco. :-)
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness I love this and I can wait to see how Dracos chase will unfold....and if Lucius wil survive
person Melkhor
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey, I really like your history so far. Its really great!! keep going!!! ^_^. but, the name of the spell in this chapter was really huge nonlikeable xD! just my opinion, I don't like the name of the spell, but the plot is funny and interesting!
person applesauce_N_soysauce
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Theres got to be more to this...I'm addicted to this fic.
Not a fatal illness but the cure can be reading another chapter.
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GO HARRY! breaking wards and then casting such a selfless spell! major points for him! but he still is a dork when it comes to draco. honestly they just need to snog
person YanaYugi
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cool chapter
i love it
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WoW!
Absolutely great!
cant't wait until next chapter!
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well now...
It sounds like Draco is gonna be in for a fun time while Harry makes him work (hopefully very hard) for a chance with him.

Thanks for the update, that is just what I needed after a Long Day's Work.
person hachan
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL so far!
person avihenda
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was probably the best chapter yet! ^_^
It nearly feels like the spell thing on lucius was used to let draco get closer to harry, what with him still in the room and narcissa just comming into the room. I'm probably over analysing stuff but still. I like how both draco and harry are equaly stuborn but in two diffrent ways. :-) I'm completly looking forward to the next chapter!