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for Bloody But Unbowed

by Lomonaaeren

person GML
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That Son Of a Bcith!!! *looks scandalised* I can't believe those No good Mother Fcuekrs!!! I can't believe they would take Harry off of Lucius' case!! I'd say it would serve them right if Lucius, along with removing himself, ceased all funding he has made to the hospital. I can just imagine that would be quite a blow considdering how wealthy the Malfoy's are. *smirk* So Harry is finally leaving St Mungos. Now THAT really will be quite the blow. I doubt they have any other Mediwizards or even Healers as talented as Harry. *nods* Dude! I just found this on FF.Net. *tilts head* Question! Are there going to be any NC17 parts later? And if so are you going to be posting them on FF.Net as well? Just wanting to know 'cause it's easier to track fics on FF.Net then here because of their favorites/Alerts lists. Either way, I'm still clinging to this fic till the end!! More Please! ASAP! ASAP ASAP ASAP!!! (Random thought: Did you kow the human brain can read words properly even when the letters are mixed up as long as the first and last letters are in place? A neat trick for slipping past auto-censoring on sites like FF.Net. *wink* It's just habit now, lol.)
person Jan
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, it's getting good!!! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. Though I order why Harry hadn't already started a private practice already. I mean Harry did have money, does he still does in this story?

Please update chapter 7 soon ^_^

Jan
person Rebriddle
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! You truly have a gift of story telling!! The characters are dynamic and interesting and the plot works well ^__^ I can not wait for the next chapter.
person Caldonya
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another Great one! I don't know why but I don't want Harry to leave his other patiences(sp?).
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WoW!
I wonder who took Harry out of Malfoy's case!
I was so HAPPY to find there were not only one but two new chapters! I am really hooked on this fic!
Please, update soon!
Greetings,
Akasha
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
o.0 who was the other healer? im glad harry's going with lucius.
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So, what is wrong with Harry that he can't keep a relationship? Does he just have deeply hidden feelings for Draco that it ruins all of his relationships, or is it something else? Anyway, I really liked that chapter but also got really confused, update soon please ;)
person kittycat30
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I missed some updates, so I'm reviewing after I've read them all. I think Harry should have quit that job long ago!!! Um, the edge of the smile??? Hopefully, it's something non-sinister like helping Draco get to Harry. Yeah, it won't be that though, will it??? Can't wait for more!
person Jilliane
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 6)

Well, as much as I'd like to see Harry tell Emptyweed to shove the job us his arse, I have to wonder if he'd really be any happier at Malfoy Manor. Of course, in the end, he would get his own practice, so there's that. I liked the line where you said Harry would wish he'd taken a closer look at the edges of Lucius' smile. Cliffie-ish sounding, and the suspense is killing me!

This may just be me, but the more I read this story, the more I find it, in some ways, vaguely reminiscent of "House". Only the HP Wizarding version. (Or something like that) Although Harry isn't as curmudgeonly as House, some of his more flippant and glib responses to Draco remind me of him, and he's got the annoying and always disparaging boss always out to punish him in one way or another, quick to remind him of his shortcomings, assigned (and now removed from) the seemingly unsurmountable case that nobody else wants or is willing to take. Mind you, as I said, this may just be me. At any rate, I'm enjoying the story immensely, particluarly the Malfoys' new found respect and confidence in Harry. I also can't help wondering at Emptyweed's motives in removing Harry from the case....is he maybe in on the cursing of Lucius somehow? Is he Lucius' enemy at St. Mungo's that Harry wants to find?

I'm probably completely off base, (which is what I get for speculating) but nonetheless, I'm looking forward to the update!

person qwerty
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooo! Private practice, that's pretty sweet. I wonder what Lucius is planning...
I'm glad that Harry finally gave Draco a talking to. It was long overdue
Update!