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for Bloody But Unbowed

by Lomonaaeren

person GML
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! *shivers* THAT was absolutely perfect. *licks lips* Damn. *grin* You get major Kudos for the best written HPDM Smut scene I've read in months. *nods happily* Well worth the long wait. *beams* It's rather a reliefe to confirm that Healer Pontiff is innocent. It would have been horrible to find out someone so close to Harry had double-crossed him so horribly. *falls over laughing* Julius! Talk about a pompous Ass! *shakes head* The boils thing was rather brillint, I must say. *grin* It's the least he deserves for what he did to Lucius! *glares* Self-absorbed Prick! Ought to have his testicles ripped off. That's where your ending it? *pouts* I was rather hoping to get to see Harry take his Potions exam again, not to mention with all that talk about adopting you've got me wondering about their child. *sigh* Ah, well. Can't always have everything you want. (Mini-ONE-shot side stories on these topics would be MUCH appreciated.) It was a brilliant fic from start to finish. Ta!
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes Yes Yes! Finally we get to the sex!!!!! I'm very pleased by the way you ended this! Why must Harry's former lovers be such jackasses?!
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was very "happy" with the sex scene....THANK-YOU!!!!!
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope your moving goes well. Keep writing, you do it very well. I love the way your mind works. Thanks for this story, i thoroughly enjoyed it. :)
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok ill come out and say it, i didnt think you could end the story with only one chapter left....i was afraid it would be forced(mmm end of the HP series comes to mind...) but once again you pull and beautiful rabbit out of the hat....this was a wonderful story, my fave. thus far....good luck with your move, and come back soon!
person YanaYugi
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
are you writing a sequel
person avihenda
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
and now this lovely story is over. Sad and uplifting at the same time. I hope your other fic the shakespear one will be as good as this one. So far it's mostly a cunning cat and mouse story. Just that moth of tem are the cat and mouse at the same time... he he
Thank you for a great read and I hope you do more fics with a portrail of lusius like this one. I really enjoyed him.

Good luck moving!
person Mangacat
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MWAHAHahahaha... brilliant!! Finish with a flourish, I especially liked the way you took care of the open questions about Lucius' assault... well, well, ther Auror, eh? He should really have thought before acting like that I mean, he's in law enforcement, for heaven's sake and he CONFESSED! Someone has to be either ingeniusly self-confident to pull it off or incredibly and incurably stupid... I suspect he's both which makes it worse actually. I hope he learns from it.
Well... with all the open questions wrapped up and a glorious future ahead, it's once more the end of a long path on your mind *g* I very much enjoyed reading it as always. I wish you well with moving and getting settled into your new home and hope you'll be up and about in time!!
Cat
person MewMew2
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for posting this story. It was absolutely excellent. I'll have to check out some of your others now. Good luck w/ moving, it's the task of Unpacking that can really take an eternity.
person Jan
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw! I'm sad to see it end!

You did a great job!

Jan ^_^