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for Bloody But Unbowed

by Lomonaaeren

person Storm
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more. Great job! Keep up the good work. I'm curious to see how Harry heals Lucius and how Draco finally wins Harry over.
person Mangacat
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MEAHAHahahha... drugging showers, sarcastic house-elfs and extraordinarly courteous hosts, well, Harry's in for quite the trip I presume.. I can just lough about his antics!!
Cat
person Jilliane
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 8)

Again, your descriptions of Malfoy Manor make me want to see it for myself! If I had a shower like that I might live in it!


Harry is feeling overwhelmed by it all, the opulence of the Manor, the sudden change of heart concerning people who were once his enemies and tried to harm him, it's hard to suddenly begin trusting people when you've distrusted them for so long, I suppose I might feel the same way. I would imagine he's feeling a bit trapped as well, and it's hard for him to understand people who take creature comforts so seriously when he's used to putting his job and the people he treats before himself, to the point of negelecting his own well being. I understand all that, as well as him thinking that the Heart's Blessing spell, a spell he's used to treat patients before, is just a matter of course for a mediwizard, it just seems that Harry is being a little too harsh and judgemental, although I guess I can't really blame him for that. Still, he seems to be vaguely aware that perhaps he should alter his notions on the Malfoys, that as Draco pointed out and he himself realised, he really doesn't know them. I hope he starts giving them a chance, and that they turn out to worthy of that chance, that they mean what they say.

Looking forward to the next update and to what Lucius has to say to Harry. This is a great story (yours always are) that keeps me guessing and has really piqued my interest.
person GML
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sing-song* Poor Harry, forced to live in such luxury. *snicker* Then again, I suppose it would be a bit much for him. *grin* What I'm dying to know is how long it's going to take Draco to chip his way completely through Harry's barriers and into his bed, er, I mean, his heart. *innocent smile* I can just imagine how much of a run-around Harry's going to put that man through. *snicker* The reason I was asking is because some people take the FF.Net rating system so far that they edit out all sex scenes beyond a hand job from their stories. It's sad really considering how none of the administrators actually pays that much attention to what is written under the M rating. *shakes head* More Please! ASAP! ASAP ASAP ASAP!!!
person MewMew2
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job. Please update again when you can!
person Lina03
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, wonderful job with this story, I have really come to like it. I especially love Harry's manner and good humor. Thank you for your hard work and I look forward to your next update. I can't wait and see what Lucius' smile really portended to. ^_^
person Mangacat
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MWAHahahahaa... I like the way that relationship seems to swap back and forth between them, it's refreshing, and I really got the feeling that your characterization of the participants in this game have once more changed around completely while retaining their most attractive notions. I've never come upon a writer who managed to have so little stereotypes and so many facettes inside the same set of characters, that all seem to fit into each other and according to the environment!! And Harry being puzzled by Narcissa's joke, hilarious!! Mwahahaha... even if Harry didn't really understand what it was that Healer Pontiff tried to explain, it should serve him an interesting time!!
Cat
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 8!!!
person Luvdonite
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think that it's good for Harry that he's getting more and new people into his life who actually care for and love him as a person besides Ron and Hermione. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
person avihenda
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wonderful chapter! I'm looking forward to seeing what draco will do when he figures out harry isn't sleeping like he thinks he should. :-)
Harry seams very weak towards motherfigures. Like he can't bare disapointing them. :-)
Keep it up!