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for Bloody But Unbowed

by Lomonaaeren

person Huh?
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Must have missed it the first time around but when did Harry suddenly welcome Draco's advances and why? For the 1st 9-10 chapters, Harry was all "I don't want you Malfoy" and now he's all "Draco's amazing!" Now Harry cares about what Draco thinks of him and about what Draco thinks about his clothes and everything!
What gives?
person qwerty
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! Nice to see Harry adapting to having someone there for him!
person MewMew2
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job. Please continue to update your story when you can.
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! stop teasing us!!!
person kittycat30
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't imagine having to play a game while trying to do my job. I guess, in a sense, we do that every day. In this story, it's at the forefront of every interaction. That has to be tiring for Harry! After all the mind games and posturing, he still has enough sense to find a possibly small part of Lucius' problems... amazing! I can't wait for more!
person Ann
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The house elf's speech was wonderfully written. It shows great talent when you can type this much dialogue and this much character development in such a short amount of time.
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As much as I love Draco, I am still not sure if I want to hit him or kiss him - If I were Harry!
person Sara
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do hope you update your story again soon that was another absolutely lovely chapter.
person js
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved the way you ended the chapter. I love Draco's seduction of Harry. :)
person Jilliane
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 11)

Oh my goodness....Rogers' little speech on being a Malfoy reminded me sooo much of my father-in-law it was creepy!


Nice to see that Harry is at least considering Draco as a lover. And Draco is nothing if not persistent. Looking forward to the update.