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I'm so thankful that she isn't bad....and I loved her letter!!!

"He can make Veritaserum for me. I prefer to take it in tea; I have an abnormal sensitivity to potions that others find tasteless."

*LLLLLOOOOOLLLL*

And I loved your whole story...it was really, really great and I saved it as one of my favourites :)

Thanks for it and have a great week!

Bye,
LIls

wow. just. wow. words fail me.

wow! i enjoyed every minute of this story!!! thanks so much for writing it! ^____^

HI! I love this story and I will definitely continue reading it (am only on chapter 12....I think. I lose track and don't pay attention to that when it's good) but there is one thing that bothers me about this story and it doesn't even have anything to do with the plot or the characters or anything else and it certainly isn't something that will make me stop reading. It's the word whilst. Every time I come across it my reading voice (you know, the one in your head that your hear when you read) stutters and I have to stop and substitute the word while in there for it. I guess I was just wondering why you decided to use this particular word constantly in place of the word while? See? Nothing huge just something that makes me grumble and slows me down when I'm reading. Thanks!

Great job! Sad to see it end but you're right it did not need to be dragged out. Can't wait to see more work from you. Keep up the good work.

Sooo gonna miss this!

Terrific. I especially enjoy the characterization of Narcissa and Ron - you give them such depth in just a few (well-chosen) words. Watching Harry come out from behind his defenses was a delight. The story has a nice sense of "and they lived happily ever after." There is a strong feeling that this was just a small, important part of the entirety of Harry's life, and not the only matter of note in his existence. I can see a future stretching bright before them all, busy and productive and simply getting better in every particular.
Great job. I love your work.

That was one Hell of a kick-ass story! I'm glad I didn't find it until it was completed-I'm not a patient person. Thanks for writing it!

Brilliant! I particularly loved how it all tied together so neatly, and didn't feel rushed at all. Harry was very likeable, and Draco having to deal with his stubborn nature made this a very comical read! Good work, absolutely perfect ending, and thank you for the great story!!

awesome ending to the story and i'm sad that it's over.