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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It just gets better and better. ;-)
I love the way Draco gets closer to Harry.
And also how Harry matures, even though
I'd probably go insane when treated like a small child. XD
You write so realistic that I sometimes can
experience all the different emotions you describe.
I really look forward to your next chapters. ^.^
Once again: Awesome story!!!
I love the way Draco gets closer to Harry.
And also how Harry matures, even though
I'd probably go insane when treated like a small child. XD
You write so realistic that I sometimes can
experience all the different emotions you describe.
I really look forward to your next chapters. ^.^
Once again: Awesome story!!!
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 13!!! Harry sooo fits in with the Malfoys!
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MWAahahaha.. It gets more pleasurable to read every time!! I like, like, like Rogers, he's soooo cute and a really extraordinary house-elf. I got the feeling we won't like the revelation of who exactly made all those visits, but I think she's our link to St. Mungo's attack. Well, it can only get better. I like how you address all these issues Harry has from his past and raising so quietly and inconspicious!! It's going to come back to bite him in the arse, I'm sure!
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! I read this yesterday night and was trilled. that was a great chapter. all angsty and smutty at the same time. :-)
But I was thinking, harry's spell on Lucius the one that made him a part of the family. shouldn't that keep lucius alive even if all the other spells failed? Dosn't that meen that Harry didn't need to even try to sacrefice his life 2-3 chapter ago when the cutting curces tryed to open lucius head up? Or have I missed something?
I*m looking forward to the next chapter :-)
keep it up!
But I was thinking, harry's spell on Lucius the one that made him a part of the family. shouldn't that keep lucius alive even if all the other spells failed? Dosn't that meen that Harry didn't need to even try to sacrefice his life 2-3 chapter ago when the cutting curces tryed to open lucius head up? Or have I missed something?
I*m looking forward to the next chapter :-)
keep it up!
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really hope the potion works
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the story is yummy. a question though, you've mentioned unless its being looked for the headache curse would go unnoticed but earlier hermione was trying muggle techniques to cure it but wouldn't she of looked up wizarding also and come across it at some point, Ron would of suggested it since for his wizarding childhood magic was the constant cure. Harry was known for his hero syndrom as apart of his personality before and any self neglect appeared to be part habit from childhood abuse that he was positively growth out of. Hermione and Ron were trying to watch harry's habits closely when they turned bad again to worse and support him getting better. she at least couldn't of not noticed harry was practically stalked and/or threatened by exs after six failed relationships and was warding things like his coat against regular hexes from his boss and not surmised the same abuse caused the headaches after basic methods and cures failed. Same goes for healers at St.Mungos not all were abusive towards him, even more then one seemed friends, wouldn't one of them of noticed the abuse at least realized his behavior was unhealthy or abnormal? And I'm very suspicious that theres more to beetle bite from earlier then your letting on.
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter very much. I'm wondering if Draco will tryto have a small crusade hunting down who ever put the curse on harry. it looks a bit like it. Like he wants to do it without Harry knowing about it.
Hope you update soon!
Hope you update soon!
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know I reviewed one of your stories a while ago(I can't remember which one), but I wanted to tell you that you are a brilliant writer and that I look forward to the times when you update your stories. This one is another good one. Keep up the good work!
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter.
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are one creative person. I don't know where you come up with everything. And yes I did quite enjoy the semi kisses. Please update soon, I am dying to find out what happens. ;)