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for Bloody But Unbowed

by Lomonaaeren

schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I suck at reviews but I wanted to tell you i love this story. thanks for writing!
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ugh. I was so mad at Draco for trying to forbid Harry to stay in the manor... even if I had a feeling that it would be the right choice (but of course, where's the fun in that?)

It's interesting to see some things change, but I love how you still keep that touch of arrogance he must have. Draco feels as though he has the right to order Harry around (well, via house elf) and I'm glad you kept that part of him, because it's something that needs to be addressed for a relationship to work between the two.
person avihenda
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow this was a really interesting chapter! :-) Harry really puts down his foot and floors Draco with aparating from malfoy manor. ^_^ And then just hours later going complitly into fighting mode and a message like that. I totally enjoyed that!
Hope you update soon. and I'm looking forward to seeing draco and the new ex interact. He seems fun.
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
uh oh! harry better have swift feet. lol. i wonder who cast those curses? will harry's ex help him or hurt him i wonder. and i would have been bitchy too if draco tried to restrain me like that.
person kittycat30
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a twist!!! And just when I thought things might be going well w/ H&D, it all gets mixed up again. I can't wait to see what happens next!
person Haramiya
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter.
I LOVE it that Draco and Harry finally got closer...even though they had an argument right afterwards.
The end is really exciting. ;-)
Now I have to check EVERY day hoping that you'll update really soon.
I just have to know who exactly planned this conspiracy against Lucius and tried to keep Harry down all the time.

Please keep up your fantastic work. XD
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It may seem a stupid question when Harry is running for his life, but wouldn't his habit of skipping over text that he thinks is irrelevant have something to do with his inability to pass Potions?
person alma
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The house elf is pretty straight forward, I love it.
person alma
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so loving this Draco.
person alma
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.