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Huh.. that was quite the commotion we had there, but Harry took it in stride as always.. certainly he wouldn't have been able to pull it off had he not been veteran.. ah, well, I like the scene after with the Malfoys who have to do quite a bit of catching up until this can be resolved.. what really irks me is not the conspiracy itself so much as the thing that there seems to be an entirely independent and scarily powerful private army at the disposal of someone connected to the hospital and nobody knows what's going on.. least of all the authorities! THAT's a scary thought!
Cat

Loverly! More soon, yes?!

Yay and a new chapter is up! :-) I liked it but it had to little malyfoy harry interaction for it to be top notch for me. But it dose look good for the next chapter. I have the feeling the malfoys will be very protective of Harry when they get him home. :-) but not in the smothering type but more the "would you like som more soup" or "you should rest more" type of thing. I'm totally looking forward to it sneaking out that harry was nearly killed so I can see the Malfoys reaction. Especially Lucius, we havn't seen much from him lately.
Keep it up!

I like this story so far. Harry is doing something that he likes, he's not some defenseless maiden in distress(I don't know why people write him that way AFTER he defeated the DL), he has depth in his character (as do the Malfoys) and he's going to learn to be a true part of a family. Except for some grammar problems, I like the way the story is written. I can't wait for the next chapter!

None were mortal; none would keep him from fighting back.

mortal=> *fatal ?

Oh, that was quite a moment between Harry, Draco and Narcissa. Very powerful. Nice job.

My heart was racing through the whole chase! Harry was amazing! Narcissa to the rescue was perfect. The Malfoys seem more human now. I think he'll go back with them... or, I hope he will!

Aw. That ending was very sweet. The "We like you" statement was simple but it had a powerful affect on Harry.
Great chapter!

good chapter.

hee hee poor Harry
but i bet you will like going back