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Loved Harry's parting shot to Lucius is Chapter 15.

I admit to breaking out in a serious case of the giggles at Rogers reaction to Harry's Orders.

wow... great story so far. The only thing is the sudden acceptence of Harry by the Malfoys, I understand it, but I feel like it was a little rushed. Maybe because the rest of the plot is so detailed?

Anyways, I just wanted to say that your writing is exquisite, I have been reading your other works ( I'm about half way through Alchemical Discontent ) and I just have to applaud you, for bringing real art to fandom, in a time of trashy one shots and song fics that could've been written by a middle schooler

Not a problem! I've enjoyed your writing abilities (Reading Changing of the Guard now). Which leads me very quickly to a question I had in one of them (The Scorpius/James one, I think) where you mentioned a muggleborn having three children. I know it has been awhile, but it bugged me. Whom did you mean? Back to the story: ...Harry seems to be going back and forth. Talking with Hermione he the narrative doesn't call it "his family" and later with Lucius, he calls them family. I hope he can become even more certain in the future. This transformation in relationships is really quite wonderful. I love Rogers here and his calling Harry stupid. lol So it is Pontiff then? Anyways, I like that Harry is enjoying the bed all of a sudden, only after having occasion to have Draco in his bed of course. lol Wonderful job. I'm quite proud of Ron here too. His worry will hopefully truly jolt Harry into taking better care of himself.

harry is very good about upset the malfoys family balence isnt he...

So soory I have not reviewed the last chapters, I actualy have not checked in to this story since the last time i reviewed ^__^ I love this story! I love how Harry is still fighting and how the relatinships are progressing with a more relaxed real pace ^__^ wonderful

Soooo need chapter 15!!!!

Fourteen chapters later and the thing that ends up sticking the most is that bit about the sign Harry made Hermione wear. lol :D No, but seriously, I started reading this thinking it would be a bit crack seeing as it was described that Lucius was hurt, and Draco was going to be flirting. But in a very big way, the way you've handled Draco's gestures and emotions towards everything is quite...beautiful. So down the line then: Rogers is an interesting edition. lol I really can't get enough of a sassy house elf. Pontiff...I mean I originally liked her presence before Harry moved into the manor. I found her advice in Harry's mind to be interesting, and a good show of how Harry has matured. But I can't help but think she is a bad guy in this now. lol I sort of hope not but I'm even more glad that the other Healer was a good person trying to help Harry while giving him... headaches? I'm intersted in how you'll be connecting that. I like the various spells you've introduced as well, especially that Heart one. That's really touching actually. I can't get enough of Draco's innuendoes and they always have me in stitches. In response to Harry and Draco's relationship... I understand the well intention, and understand Harry's own need to fight harder (after already blaming himself for the deaths of others probably because he feels he should have worked just a little harder), but I can't really pick whose right, which I also like about this. Lucius's and Harry's relationship is equally entertaining, and I love Narcissa so much. She is a more refined version of Molly, and I love her "Mum" powers. lol As for Harry's lovers.... jeez. Poor guy. With so many he can't even get half to be normal functioning citizens after them leaving him. lol And finally, covering Harry. I love him to peices here. I like his sincere modesty that you bring out, and that he chose a Healing profession. He is frustrating, and of course I roll my eyes at his justifications for not taking care of himself, but it is all believable, and it doesn't seem like you are forcing a version of Griffindor Harry. Wonderful job so far. I look forward to more.

omg. WE LIKE YOU. that has got to be one of the best lines ever.

you write the best stories. :)

That was an awesome fighting scene but that chapter seemed so short. please write more and update soon!
Sara

AWWWWW! That was so adorable. they like him they really like him. Thank you for those last two chapters, Draco needs to be more understanding of Harry and Harry needs to be more rational. They are both like firecrackers, so perfect for eachother. Please update soon ;)