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for Bloody But Unbowed

by Lomonaaeren

schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading for hours now and I love your story!!! Your characterization is amazing and I am really looking forward to your next chapter!!!

person avihenda
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
We got a bit of answers in this chapter. :-) Harry seams to have a thing with house elfs, they can't help but love him lol.
I'm really happy for the extra chapter today. great read! Hope you update soon!
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this is the first time I have reviewed this story, but I think this is an amazing story. I do believe that the Malfoy's view on the hearts blessing was a little extreme but then again they were always pretty extreme if you think about it. :)
person Lina03
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good ending on this chapter. I also found Harry's and Draco's interaction so romantic, but in a subtle more subdued manner than the norm, it was beautiful. Anyways, wonderful work once again and I really look forward to your next update. By the way, I think I am really coming to love that house elf, he can really tell it like it is, huh? ^_^
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
emptyweed is such a prick. i like how harrys keeping draco on his toes.
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 16!!!
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I kind of like when Harry yells, but I loke it better when Draco is taking care of Harry. Such a good couple they make. Hope you update soon. :)
person YanaYugi
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hee hee i bet Draco keeps a stronger eye on Harry
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for explaining that. I didn't say it before but I really like that you made Roger's Dobby's dad. And the way you allowed Narcissa to praise Lily for her heroics in saving her son, rather than only on Harry as the rest of the Wizarding world does. The stereotypes section, with you drawing that parallel between the Dursleys and Malfoys was well played, as usually one of the characters dont always have to face up to their irrationality, and the parallel is simply drawn that Harry realizes how similiar Draco and Dudley are. It was funny how the mention of Emptyweed to Draco broke apart that comforting scene. lol The other parallel between Emptyweed and Snape was interesting, although I'm glad you subtly made it known that Snape was much more of a hero. What did Emptyweed mean by "giving you [Harry] a chance to hurt me"? Does he mean in skill or what? Harry wouldn't harm him for telling the truth. That line puzzled me a bit. Anyways, wonderful job so far. After finishing Changing of the Guard, I am even more appreciative of the friendship with Ron and Hermione Harry has, and the option for him to have both families in his life.
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha lucius flabbergasted! riot!