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Thanks for updating. I really want to see more Hary and Draco interaction. Of all sorts. I still don't understand the blood thing but whatever, I'll deal. I like that Harry gave Draco something to think about. Update soon, please;)

Thank you so much for finding the time to post these latest chapters! They were wonderful as always, but I must agree with one of the others, In order to weave the inner workings of the Malfoy's into the story and to give them more depth, a section of the next chapter in from one of their perspectives would be very helpful. It wouldn't even have to be half of a chapter, just a small part would be very helpful. Thank you again for posting, please continue to do so when time is available to you.

i hope they find the one who put the spell on Lucius

I just read the whole story to date today, and I love it! I love the character development, writing style, etc.... I could go on and on. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

yeah.. I definitely don't trust the notion that Emptyweed might know everything there is to know. After all he provided them with nothing more than the verifictation of what they already knew. So, we're really not one step further into the game than before this chapter, even if it might feel like it. Hmmmm.. ok, let's take care of Lucius first, so that the Malfoys are up to parr at full strength... I still love Rogers, he's sooooo cute!!
Cat

Great Chapter!
It's ok, you made the circumstances much clearer with the argument between Harry and Draco. You are doing a great job, and I only have a few critiques.
Harry seems to flip flop whether or not he likes Draco, and I dont think he would do that, based on how you've developed him. I understand the point you are trying to make, but its a little much. Try making Harry more upset with himself over his conflicting feelings, or dress Draco up as a nun... what do I know, you are the author.
xoxo

I would have loved to seen lucius's face as Harry yelled at him.

I'm back! Sorry, I seem to have fallen behind a touch. My step-mum banned me from her computer for a few days. Old bat. *shakes head* Miss me? *smirk* Now the review: Emptyweed is still a complete arse. *nods* And Lucius is Officially an Idiot. I've called Lucius many things in my time, bastard, prick, SOB, but idiot was never one of them. *disapointed sigh* Though... the sight of a stunned Lucius is definately one for the history books, lol. So Harry is finally settling down into his new family. *smile* And all it took was, of course, him loosing his temper followed by a flight for his life. Can't remember if I've said this before (and I'm too tired to be buggered to look) but, I'm rather loving his further interaction between Harry and Draco. The way they are drawing so much closer now, yet still fight to hold their own in arguments is utterly brilliant. And Narcissa! It's nice to see the caring side of her as apposed to the stiff hostess routine that seemed to come accross before. I can't wait to see how Harry's acclamating himself into the Malfoy family plays out now that he seems to have crossed the worst hurdle. More Please! ASAP! ASAP ASAP ASAP!!!

It seems like things are coming together. I can't wait for more!

Well I'm glad that Pontiff isn't involved! I knew that Emptyweed was just trying to pull a Snape!
Great chapter!