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I just finished reading your wonderful story, "The Slytherin Redemption", from start to finish. What an original and well-written story this is. I have never read anything that does such a good job of explaining post-war interactions between muggles and the wizarding world. The initial tale about Gregory Goyle was heartbreakingly tender and satisfying. The long story arc of Draco, beginning with the letter to Scorpius (a great literary tool to advance the story, by the way) was utterly engaging and captivated my attention from start to finish. The original characters you introduced were so well-written and carefully crafted that I felt just as involved with their lives as those of the canon characters. This is fabulous story. Thank you for writing it.

I've only read the first chapter and I just had to tell you that I am utterly gobsmacked--in a very good way. *grin*

Truly, this chapter about Gregory Goyle was NOTHING like I ever expected, and I think it was an amazing and wonderful idea. I'm a huge fan of redemption stories and I am about to dive into the rest of the chapters here. I fully expect them to be just as fantastic as this chapter.

Well done!

Oh, I have wept and laughed and sighed and smiled and cheered as I read Draco and Liz's story. You have more than fulfilled the promise of that first chapter. I should have been doing housework and cooked supper and instead I was pulled into your ficverse. I don't regret the hours spent reading at all.

I am planning on reading more of your work, but this tale will always hold a special place on my favorites list. Well done!

This series makes it really easy to get into Forgiveness. I like that it uses so many different characters & connects them all. I also like that it puts Slytherin's in a better light w/out making them out to be overly good.

(Chapters 26 & 27)

Oh, Bravo!!! I'm so sad to see this story end. I really just want to keep reading on and on about these people and their lives. Your writing takes these same characters, along with some additional ones, we all know from the canon books and gives them a depth and realness they never had before, all whilst keeping them in character and totally believeable. This is just a truly excellent saga that eveybody should read. I can't tell you enough how impressive this really is. You are a superb writer, don't let the lack of hits or reviews make you think you aren't. People will find the story and word will spread. In the meantime, I'll enjoy the other stories you're working on, and then greatly anticipate each new story you come up with, so please,, never stop writing!

(Chapters 24 & 25)

To continue the lovefest.....I loved Lucius' murmured line to Padma! I really love the way you write Lucius in this story. I'm glad he was cleared and finally let out of Azkaban, and I had to laugh when he was sentenced to probation with Ian. I love his growing respect for Liz, and I really loved his words of advice to Toby. Very Malfoy. What I love best about this chapter and your Lucius are his struggles to cope with and adjust to his new world and changed circumstances. I love how he's slightly appalled at himself for being attracted to Padma, a woman his own son's age, but yet still wants her. That along with the contrast of his continued thoughts of Narcissa, despite her nastiness and vindictiveness are very touching. He loved her, he was married to her for a long time, and she hurt him, wounded him deeply, as well as rudely surprised him with the divorce, and yet he still thinks of the good times they had together. He's human, and that's what I love most about the way you write him. My favourite part was the bit when he was walking past the Shrieking Shack and thought of Severus, his only true friend and how much he wished to be able to see him again. It was the tears that had me undone. Excellent writing.

I am so sorry that I came to this story late and did not have the opportunity to encourage you throughout your updates.

Chap. 10 of Penance was so heartbreaking. I felt every bit of Draco's despair, and I think it was wise to give us Harry's point-of-view during the removal of the body and the last rites. The image of him cradling his former nemesis' wriggly newborn while standing in his shabby flat moved me greatly. Ginny's gentleness towards Draco and her sincere offers of support were so wonderful and needed. I like how you've portrayed her, as well. And I really love how you've exposed Harry to this side of the war that he was heretofore unaware of through Draco's story. It seems very fitting that it would be the young Malfoy to school him on the worst of the human traits.

The Epilogue was full of hope for the future, and I loved how you made Draco the liaison for the Muggleborns affected by the war. The fact that Lucius hopes to use this position to his advantage, though, was a perfect bit of characterization. Lucius still manages to thrill me with his cold, yet charming demeanor, and he was positively brilliant during his scene with Draco. I'm so eager to see how you'll make use of him as the next installment continues their story.

This is such a mature and thought-provoking piece. It's quite unusual for this site.

I just finished Ch. 7 & 8 of Penance. You do Draco a great service in your depiction, truly. I feel much like Harry, at various points of his reading. Draco provides a strong, unwavering voice in his narrative. To be honest, I very rarely get sucked into HP stories that don't feature Harry prominently in the action, so for me to have continued reading says a lot about your writing.

One thing I wanted to note was your treatment of the Death Eater rapes and how you compared them to the atrocities of real war. This is another area that is rarely dealt with in any realistic measure in fanfic, but something that I always felt was implicit in canon. Rather than serve up details for purely prurient interest, you suggest real ramifications of a war waged over purity and fascism.

She wanted to raise our child with a faith in a sacrificial blood-god who saved the world. The concept was still a little too Gryffindor for me I loved this line. Especially coming out of Draco's mouth.

(Chapters 22 & 23)

I loved it that Harry did what he could to make a bad situation a little easier, volunteering to be the one to arrest Draco. O loved it that he said he couldn't bear it to be someone that didn't care. I liked the "ferret" and "Potty" and the "Eugene" and the "Shut it". A nice little bit of levity in a sad circumstance. I loved it the Draco still thought to pray for Hermione and her family given what he was facing, and that he had hope he would one day get back to St. Catherine's. Even though it's so sad, I loved it that Draco couldn't bear to smell or use Liz's shampoo whilst in Azkaban, that he loves and misses her so much it would drive him mad.

I loved the older students from other Houses taking up Toby's defense. I loved it that Blaise was there to comfort Toby, that he took him into his lap, that he cares so much, about Toby, and all his students, and about Pansy. I love it that he loves her so much, that he's stayed by her even in her madness.

I love Liz. I love her strength and her grit and her devotion to Draco. I love it that she feels they were meant to be.

I love poor Lucius. I love it that, evil bitch that Narcissa is, it still made him cry when he learned that she divorced him.

I love this story, and I love all the little things that go into this story. I love your writing, I love all that you put into it, and what I love most is that you make me feel like these are real people and that you make me care about them.

I just love it all.

(Salvation: Chapters 20 & 21)

I love Liz! I love how she was undaunted by Lucius. I like how she and Ginny are friends. Ginny's account of Harry's proposal made me smile.

Poor little Toby. I'm glad he's finally getting the father he's wished for, and I'm glad it's Draco. I'm glad he's got Professor Zabini on his side, an authority figure he can count on and talk to at Hogwarts. And honestly, I wish someone would take Rita Skeeter's poison pen and shove it up her arse. Hermione has dealt with her before, I'm glad to see she will again.

I can't believe so few people have read or reviewed these stories. That may be because of the category they have to be placed under. I feel kind of bad about it since it was me that asked you to post them on this site in the first place. Still, I'm glad you did, because these are surely the best written and most interesting stories on this site.