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person poohbear74
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow!!

that was really hard to read, but it was oh so good!
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK this should definitely NOT be a one shot. It's my opinion that if you put a heap of effort into it, this plot line could be great. You could do great things with it. I really really need to see more of it!! Your opening scenes created such promise and it sounded so good, and then it said "The End" and I was like WHAT NO NO NO NO THIS CAN'T BE THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So yeah, I would really love more.
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Twisted. I actually look forward to part two.
person kunitsu
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, I would love to see part 2 and 3 of this
person Luvdonite
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
where's part 2 & 3????????????? you can't say something like that and not have them up!!!!!!!! lol