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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start! please update soon. I want James to get his upcomings as well!!!
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Like the idea for your story so far. Can't wait till next chapter.
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful beginning. I simply love abused Harry (yeah, I know I'm perverted). You wrote this chapter with so much emotion, so much understanding that you made my cry. Poor little sub!Harry.
I hope to read more soon and for Harry to be the one and only for the alpha.
Wonderful job. Keep on going!
love, Babs
I hope to read more soon and for Harry to be the one and only for the alpha.
Wonderful job. Keep on going!
love, Babs
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I felt really pity for the little sub. Especially as he doesn't have the heart to eat or speak. But I love the way you characterise Harry and his hope of a better future away from his current pack. Please continue. I'm curiouse what happend next.
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start! Poor Harry. I can't wait to see what happens. Update soon!
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very cool story!! i am looking forward for more to come!! email me to let me know of the update at kyuubifreak@rocketmail.com
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome beginning. I can't wait to read more. ^_^
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmm I like it. I hope you continue with the story. if you have a mailing list add me ok?
noonienoodles@yahoo.com.au
will Harry's stutter be a permanent thing or will it disappear? Will we be meeting the Alpha in the next chapter?
noonienoodles@yahoo.com.au
will Harry's stutter be a permanent thing or will it disappear? Will we be meeting the Alpha in the next chapter?
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome first chapter! I can't wait to read what you have in store next. I feel sooo bad for Harry. I hope his situation improves soon. I'm glad you didn't describe whatever punishment his father had planned for him.
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like it! wow! hope to see some more soon.