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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a story!!! I can't wait to see where this will go :) I'm shocked to see such an unruly James. I thought at first that you were trying to incorporate wolf pack mentality which is to constantly beat up on the runt/weakest one in the pack to make them strong. haha But NOPE you just wanted James to be an ass :) works for me!
Can't wait for an update!!! ^_^
Can't wait for an update!!! ^_^
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wonderful
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope to see more from you. Also if you are posting anywhere else? Like somewhere that sends alerts? amysds@hotmail.com
The story is good, of course I'm hoping fenrir is the alpha with Harry as his mate. Do submissives get pregnant? Will Harry's mate be patient with him while he breaks old habits? I'm glad his brothers seem to like him, even if they don't protect him. Depending on how they act on the journey, I'm wondering if they will stay at the castle or whatever and repudiate their old alpha james.
The story is good, of course I'm hoping fenrir is the alpha with Harry as his mate. Do submissives get pregnant? Will Harry's mate be patient with him while he breaks old habits? I'm glad his brothers seem to like him, even if they don't protect him. Depending on how they act on the journey, I'm wondering if they will stay at the castle or whatever and repudiate their old alpha james.
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey I realy love this story, I hope that u update soon. keep up the good work.
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is sweet-- but sad. I'm really looking forward to seeing more! Nice job!
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You got me so far...and need to read more.
Very captivating fic.
Love to see where its going...
Very captivating fic.
Love to see where its going...
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That... was amazing. Wow. I love it. I love the idea, I love the writing, I love Harry, I love his brothers, I love that Europe is all werewolves. I mean, I love it! I can't wait for more! I want to know why Harry is the way he is. Obviously most of it was beaten into him by James after Lily died giving birth to Harry. Is that it though? Is his speech that way because of it? I like it, if only because it adds more to who Harry is. Wow, I can't wait to read more of this. If you do alerts to tell people when you've updated, please email me at slashlover88@yahoo.com and let me know. If not, I'll be checking back here as often as possible. This was amazing, and I love it. ~dpa06~
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GREAT start--good little snippet of background information about the werewolf culture and nice introduction of the family. Hope we meet Fenrir next!
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
man this story looks awesome i really do like the first chapter and if every chapter is like this.... man i think i'll love it. hope to see an update soon. ^_^
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now this is purely intersting...! I truly see serious potential in this stort and I hope you'll keep writing and update soon.