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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaahhhh too short!! nice chapter, although not much happend, and it was kinda strange the way Rook landed on Harry.. still, i love this fic, i may not be aroun much, i
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I can't wait until Harry meets Fenrir!
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God, that was rude!! Almost amazed that they didn't demand some kind of satisfaction for the injury!
Hope the priestess touches Harry! Then perhaps she can scold the brothers and inform Fenrir exactly what kind of living Harry has endured... if she's that kind of priestess though.. Hm..
Anyway, update again soon please!!
Loving it!
Cheers!
Hope the priestess touches Harry! Then perhaps she can scold the brothers and inform Fenrir exactly what kind of living Harry has endured... if she's that kind of priestess though.. Hm..
Anyway, update again soon please!!
Loving it!
Cheers!
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I still, absolutely love this story and I am hoping that you are putting out a entire novel length fanfiction (hint hint) lol, good luck on the writing! :)
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New chapter! *dances*
Poor Harry being mistaken are disturbed. And being crushed by a fat boy! Honestly, Harry doesn't catch any breaks!
I like how Harry is slowly trying to assert himself more (as exampled by the desire to ride in the carriage).
Paul keeps running hot and cold when it comes to Harry. Sometimes he's nice, and other times he's not. Tch.
Great chapter! update!
Poor Harry being mistaken are disturbed. And being crushed by a fat boy! Honestly, Harry doesn't catch any breaks!
I like how Harry is slowly trying to assert himself more (as exampled by the desire to ride in the carriage).
Paul keeps running hot and cold when it comes to Harry. Sometimes he's nice, and other times he's not. Tch.
Great chapter! update!
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry! First his brothers unconsciously laugh at him when he accidentally burned his hand, then Marylla thinks he's disturbed them to add more icing to the cake his brother says the he gets distressed around new people! What are they trying to do to poor Harry's self esteem?
And why is The Priestess looking so intently? Is it because she could sense that he's the Alfas mate?
Please update chapter 6 soon ^_^
Jan
And why is The Priestess looking so intently? Is it because she could sense that he's the Alfas mate?
Please update chapter 6 soon ^_^
Jan
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Update! Looove this! When is he going to meet Fenrir? Can't wait for more!
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy to see you update i was getting worried. but I'm happy to see a wonderful update, and i hope to see another one soon. but i do wonder if Rook will cause trouble for harry.
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH OH OH OH!!! YAY you updated. I so can't wait for another chapter. this is becoming one of my favorite stories.
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what could be at the end of that line?
I wonder if eventually Harry will learn to be like the water and escacpe all those pesky boulders.
Poor Harry could be in some serious trouble stuck near all those hulking dominants.
I wonder if eventually Harry will learn to be like the water and escacpe all those pesky boulders.
Poor Harry could be in some serious trouble stuck near all those hulking dominants.