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I have found the beggining of this fic to drag a little bit, explaining backround and such, but I have really started to enjoy it, and am looking forward to updates with Fen in them! =]
Keep up the good work!

Squee! We've met Fenrir and aint he grand. ;]
Lovely new chapters, thanks for turning them out so quickly.
You're doing a wonderful job. <3

Dammit. I am glad that you updated and sorry that I didn't get to read it sooner. I find myself liking the way that you portrayed Fenrir in the part that you wrote of. I look forward to their arrival at the palace. I additionally look forward to reading of Harry and Fenrir's first meeting/ interaction as well as Fenrir's opinion of Harry. I do not like the description of the look in the eyes of Rook's mother. I take it that she will prove to be an obstacle in Fenrir and Harry's path. Until next time thank you for your work and the read. Take care.

i feel so sad for harry!i hope that he finds happiness! update soon hunny *kisses*

wow i like this story! it is very original which is nice since there are soooo many stories that are just like the same thing. BORING!! so yeah this is a really good story. so update soon!!!

PLEASE update~!!! I LOVE this story~!

You're story is AMAZING. No joke. I love reading every chapter you put out and I hope you can update tomorrow (Sunday), as it's the day you usually update as stated in your A.N. I can't wait until Harry meets Fenrir and what role Myrilla and the Priestess will play in the plot. Until the next chapter! :)

AMAZING chapter! Yes, its true! Don't believe that little nasty person who 'aparently' doesn't even know what good is... Anyway! I loved the update and I look forward to the next!
~rah~

I really liked this chapter and how Harry is feeling a little more confident with his brothers and new friend. I am wondering who Fenrir was actually looking for earlier and why he was trying find him.

I do think that your writing is terrific and that you do not need to worry about "writing better chapters" as someone said. Can't wait to see what is in store for Harry and when does he get to meet Fenrir.

YAY! Another Chapter! Try to write a bit longer chapters, I get so excited to see that you updated, then realise I only get a smallish amount. I know it's a difficult thing to ask for, but it would be appreciated. Greatly. And Poor Harry, he's scared. Will he meet fenrir soon? Also, I think when Harry first sees Fenrir he should either hide behind his brothers or try to cling to one. Maybe both! Cause Fenrir is supposed to be scary big right? And I hope he's kind to Harry, I hate to say it but I can't take stories where he's being beat upon and shunned by the one he's supposed to be with. Anyways keep it up, can't wait for another update!