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NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You can't stop there! How could you stop there! Is Fenrir going to be angry at him? It's not Harry's fault! And his brothers are still responsible for him they should try to go as well, and explain why Harry is the way he is. I mean even though they don't know that Harry is his mate or met him before they know he has trouble speaking and that is the Alpha wanted a response to a question or something then Harry wouldn't really be able to answer. And harry's crying! Poor soul! He's just trying to do the right thing and didn't want to appear forward thats why he left! My heart really goes out to him. He's so scared and Fenrir is so mad! You must update soon you can't leave us in suspense!

This is good. I can't wait for more!!

I love it!! I love harry's character!! I can't wait for more!!!

I can't believe you ended it there! You're so evil! We, your loyal fans have been waiting soooooo long for you and then just as you build things up - you drop us. Tease!

P.S. Never liked cliffhangers - I always thought they were a waste since a good author has built up the suspense wonderfully then ruin their hard work by ending it to hear the moans. It seems doubly hard to get both yourself and us back into the same frame of mind after a cliffhanger. Esp since most authors don't update immediatly but often wait longer than a week. So readers have gotten involved in other stories and RL etc and we see an update (exciting) click on it and have to remind ourselves OH Yeah that's what happened last time. Rather than build it built it WHAM settle reape the reviews!

Great chapter!
I hope Fenrir will kick James' ass soon! =D
Haha, hopefully Harry doesn't die of fright the next chapter. =P

It would be so awesome if fenrir brings him to another room and picks him up to calm him down. Mysterious alpha effect. Fen might think that Harry is afraid of the guy with his arm over his shoulders so will probably be uber protective

OH! What if Fenrir goes to meet James as head and James assumes that Harry did something wrong and tries something?!

Verrrrrry good !!

I am waiting to see Harry and Fenrir speaking ...

Oh my god! Evil cliffhanger of doom! But so totally good nonetheless! I hope you'll write more soon!
Take care!
Eternal Cosmos

I hope you will update very soon because I can't wait for the next chapter !!!