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awwwwwwww poor harry!! he seems so scared! geez Fenrir needs to learn to not be so threatening!!.... but this certainly looks promising! i can't wait to see what happends next and harry's brothers are going to be out of their mind worried about him! lol that should be funny. thanks for updating ^.^

UPdate again soon! Poor Harry needs to be put at ease! I feel so sorry for him!

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie

GYAAA!!!! Teaser Chapter.... seriously. I KNOW Fen can't be angry at Harry..... he just cant be.. and when he finds out how... meek Harry is in his human nature.. Fen is gonna want James's head... I seriously CANT wait. Well written Chapter.

~Sophie Max-Anderson


--She actually yelled her displeasure to the heavens when you left it with the cliff hanger. Well done.

--Rikash Moonsword

Clif fander.

noooo this was too short!! and it ended in such a clif!! pleaaaase dont take long to update, i wanna know how will fenrir react whith harry

Thanks for the update--was so excited to see it! Am surprised Fenrir didn't tear the older Potters to bits. Can't wait for the next chapter!

AHHHH!!!!!! You can't leave it there!!!! Please tell us you have the next chapter almost ready to post and it will be a VERY short time before you post the next chapter up!!! PLEASE!!!!!

Gah, silly neandertholic alphas. Sure they are cunning, clever, intellegent and (ocassionally) articulate but oh boy can they be stupid sometimes. Brute force and an obsessive kind of posessiveness isn't always the best way to show interest in another person. Sure it can give a person the warm and fuzzies at times but with somebody like Harry that is shy and withdrawn it's not exactly the right foot to lead with on Fenrir's path of courtship. I'm sure he is relived (and angry) that his mate is safe (angry because he theirfore must have left of his own free will) but I can just see Fenrir making just the wrong choice; especially when he finds out Harry isn't the werewolf that Fenrir has made him up to be in his mind.

I cannnot wait for the next chapter.

Your loyal reader,
MysticFae

OMMFG! You cruel person you! Leaving it right there. You're a tease! Well I will do the only thin gI can do and await your next update . Thanks! :DD

I hope grayback does not hurt Harry, another great chapter!