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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I just love this story! I fell in love with it the moment I finished reading the first chapter and I've kept with it ever since. And it's finally moving along.
You write very well, you have no spelling errors or grammars and your story flow is smooth. But, you could write a little longer chapters or update a bit more often. Anyway, love the story, keep up the good work!
You write very well, you have no spelling errors or grammars and your story flow is smooth. But, you could write a little longer chapters or update a bit more often. Anyway, love the story, keep up the good work!
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh god you awful person giving us a cliff-hangerish ending like that. I want to see Fenrir and Harry!!! As always I loved the new chapter and I can't wait to read the next... but did you really need to cut it off there?!? Why!!! *sigh* Anyways, I loved it, in my opinion there isn't much to improve on, please keep up the wonderful work. This is one of my favorite wips ever.
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow its been so long well... i liked it and i can't wait for you to update more frequently so please update. :)
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay another update! i love this story soo much, i think it's probably the best H/F i've read, your writing is great and i look forward to reading the next chapter
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I love this chapter but its too short!!! I can't wait to find out how Fenrir will act in response to Harry's behavior!!! Please, please, please update!!! I love this story, you are doing awesome!!!
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man what a way to end the chapter. It was a pleasant surprise to come home to an updated chapter. As always it was a pleasure to read. I eagerly look forward to the next update. Thanks for the read.
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh.... what do you have in store for Harry and Fenrir next?
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this story!!!!!!! can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep up the great work!!!!!!
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh, that was amazing. I can't wait until harry figures it out that he's the mate of the alpha and what is james going to do when he finally finds out? What is fenrir going to do when he finds out what james has done to harry? oh this is so good. please update soon!!!!
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Arrrrrggggghhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You can stop there!!!!!
Please please please update soon!
You can stop there!!!!!
Please please please update soon!