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for What Are You Worth?

by kati

person shadygrl
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wait, I just had to add -- Harry's sweet face crumpling because he's so scared! Break my heart, why don't you???

xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox shadygrl
person gummibands
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH SO GOOD!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! (jumps up and down on chair) I can't wait!!! I cant wait!!!
person Wilder
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, harry is just heartbreaking, so little knowledge of the world and so much pain in what he does know. poor thing, i just want to cuddle him then let fenrir ravage him happily... You discribed Fenrir's distress so well, i can perfectly picture him shaking with want for his sub... can't wait for next chapter, hopefully it will be the actual revelation... but knowing harry's brothers they will try and protect their brother now, unless they get a clue and fast. it must be a wake up call to see harry walking away complacently with a dom just as he has done for years with their father, just waiting for the beating... *sigh*
person Riiy
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh ! I'm waiting for more.

I'm sorry my english isn't good enough to let me say all I want to say. Amazing might express that the best.
person alma
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
person alma
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Getting really good, can't wait for more!
I would like to be notified of updates! almalarosa@aol.com
person DTDY
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, thank you for the chapter.
I feel so bad for harry though... more please.
person Jan
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh please, oh please, oh please, oh please tell me that your planning on updating soon , PLEASE! *looks at you with pleading, shiny eyes*

Please update chapter 11 soon ^_^

Jan
person Chiaki D.
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! The Fenrir you paint is so magnificent. The Werewolf culture is beautifully detrailed, and I really like the back-story of Harry here... You explain why he's the way he is, unlike other stories where he's simply submissive. The delicious UST is building up quite nicely, and I hope we get to see that-ahem-resolved soon. ;] Delightful Fenrir/Harry fic! ♥ x 10
person LMason
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! well done - definately draws the reader in - very intense. can't wait for the next chapter. :0)